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Originally Posted by 7ali
@sikander kalhoro.
dear i may not be the best to judge your abilities but in my opinion your writing needs more practise.there is incoherence between sentences and some words are inappropriately used for eg the use of "tranquilly" in the sentence makes no sense to me.again thats just my opinion
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As far as practice is concerned, yes, i am not used to practising expansions and not adept in it. There word 'tranquilly' is used here with a denotation to a sigh of relief when we get out of the obstructions and enter into success and our inward feeling are aroused .