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please evaluate my precis and give me marks too.
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Friday, October 24, 2014
Saleh Khan
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It is a good attempt but in first line some words need to be improved like ""spread social morality and responsibility"":
and avoid use of (((their and this together in the start of sentence))) overall its good and title too!
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