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Old Friday, November 21, 2014
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Sorry to say but I am not satisfied with your attempt. Your outlines are not up to the mark. Please don't play with your essay, learn 'how to attempt an essay'. Though your outlines are good but you lack a lot in techniques and way. I am not discouraging you am just telling you what I have observed.
Thanks a lot. Please help me. How can I improve writing style? How to attempt an essay?
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