very nice expansion, and suitable examples. You have correctly followed the topic from start to end and have not left the subject. Just two things i want to say, one again that take a glance on any good grammar book like 'wren and martin' as still there are many grammatical mistakes in your paragraphs because these impact the whole writing although one's expressions are best of all. and 2nd, you must, must outline your paragraph before writing it. Because, it gives order to our writings. By the way very good paragraph and admirable examples. I also should consider examples. And that example of candle, which i gave, actually i meant that a candle gives light after getting burnt, silimarly one's fortitude during adversities is like burning and this is what, when one gains a lot of good. Well i will further clarify my examples in forthcoming paragraphs. And factually i wandered from the topic in last lines. I will try to improve it. And our next topic is ' young habits die hard'.


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