Senior please evalute my essay and is it important for coming exam

Education and its problems in pakistan

1.Introduction
2.Importance of educarion
3.Present state of education in pakistan
4.Causes Leading to failure of education in pakistan
14 sub heading please sugest do i mention sub heading in outline
5.Implication resulting from failure of education
6 sub heading
6.proposal for desired education system
12 sub heading
7. Conclution
Quotation