Very good precis. Perhaps some places gone patchs e.g 'acquire knowledge and skill for bright career alone' or 'sympathetic emotions' these can be written more bitterly. & your given titles doesn't suite the passage. The first line actually defines the subject as in the given passage 'difference between education' means there is something comparative between modern day and Greeks. Best of luck i am also junior.

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