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Originally Posted by AZKAFATIMA
According to experts, not getting decent wages for their work, young people gradually lose the desire to marry, marry, have children
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This statement is grammatically wrong.
Please try to concentrate on writing sentences in a flow so that commas etc. are not needed. Your material and reasoning is quite good. But the way you have structured your sentences is horrendous.
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Originally Posted by AZKAFATIMA
It is, therefore, among criminals, increases the number of adolescents, aged 18 to 25 years.
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If you write statements like this one, examiner will be forced to ignore your material. Consequently, you will not get passing marks.