Originally Posted by exclusively

again your outlines are incorrect, if you attempt like this in exam. The checker won't pass you and cross your essay straight away. There is room for improvement. You need to learn the art of essay writting. Then attempt it, because by doing this current practice, you are wasting your precious time. I did not check out your write up due to your wrong way. Therefore, take a look at the essays either who qualified it or consult a teacher. In this regards, you can also take a look at my essays, particularly at outlines, find them in my links that i have attempted from past papers, including ce15's essays are done. I have qualified essays twice in 2013 with 53 & in 2014 with 44 scores. So, hopefully my outlines and essays will help you in understanding the way of attempting and techniques.

Thank you so much.