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Originally Posted by Nazish Hina
This is a topic i took from CE-2000 exam. I made this outline, all kinds of feedback/ criticism will be highly appreciated
Title: Advancement in science and technology is gateway for the economic prosperity of a country
1) Introduction:
Thesis Statement:
The advancement in science and technology is the only way for developing countries to get substantial economic growth.
2) Historical evidence
a)Example of Japan
b)Example of Britain
3) Current state of science in countries
a)Developed world
b)Developing world
4) How science can help prosper
a)Food cultivation and preservation
i) GMOs
ii) Easy farming: GIS and remote sensing
iii) Farmers education
b)Global Business opportunities
c)Open Source learning
d) Security and counter-terrorism
e) Disease control and vaccinations
f)Transport
g) Environment and sustainable development
Steps to be taken for advancement of Science and technology in the developing world
a) Increase in budget for research
b) Encouraging and promoting scientists
c) Government patronage and promotion
d) Collaboration among developing countries
e) Provision of accommodative environment
f) Infrastructural Requirements
Conclusion:
Science has great potential for progress in modern world. The time has come to put all of our efforts and invest in science and technology. Science would prove to be a valuable asset for the economic growth in developing world.
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Add one to two lines under introduction heading in outline. And your thesis is not promising enough. Make it more solid as your argument is not strong enough. I tried my best to develop it before but couldn't help. I ll try again. I mean you may add that there are also other factors but science is the most important one. Like this.
4)
How science can help prosper developing countries
a)
Food cultivation and preservation techniques using __________
i)
GMOs (Avoid abbreviations)
ii) Easy farming: GIS and remote sensing
iii) Farmers education (
Introducing new technologies to farmers is better heading)
b)
Increasing Global Business opportunities (Use adjective or adverb to make your point more clear)
c)Open Source learning
( What? Make it more clear )
d) Security and counter-terrorism
(I do not think so this suits here)
e) Disease control and vaccinations
f)Transport
(Vague heading)
g)
Environmental strategies and sustainable development
(Rather make it more technical)
a) Increase in budget for research
b) Encouraging and promoting scientists
c) Government patronage and promotion
(to whom)
d) Collaboration
(for what) among developing countries
e) Provision of accommodative environment
f) Infrastructural Requirements
(Make it more clear)
Conclusion:
Science has
been proved a great potential for progress in modern world. The time has come to put all of our efforts and invest in science and technology.
Introducing new and useful modes of science and technology will definitely accelerate the economic growth in developing countries.
I have tried my best to develop your outline in a more effective way and I hope you will get a more clear idea now. However, last but not the least I do appreciate your work. Keep practicing. Good Luck !
