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Old Friday, August 07, 2015
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I am sure you can write a better precis. One that is a whole, not a group of sentences forcefully stuck together. Better write it again with more flow.

About the grammar part, it's alright, apart from your last sentence which I did not understand:
This was conducted to the author that what should he deliever in the must have 13 underlinings by the conversation of a Nazism leader.
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