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Originally Posted by dua shah
BOOKS
In the ancient times(,) people had just one source of knowledge, (i.e) books. They were used to read books for enhancing (to enhance) their knowledge : ( ; ) for learning their concern books; (to learn in) schools, colleges, and universities. Besides this(,) many other books, stories, general knowledge, poetry, etc, were also used to (be) read by them. It was consider (considered) a good friend to human and if a man were (one was) not able to a purchase book or he (if one) wanted to read different writers (and) different books then he used to go to library. This was a place of knowledge with quit calmness (pin drop silence) and complete study environment.
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Dua I have noticed mistakes in your writing. The main problem is that you are constructing long sentences. It is generally difficult to deal with these types of sentences as experts do commit mistakes in writing this sort of sentences. Try to write simple sentences.
Good thing is that you have mature thoughts.