some corrections are;
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6. Aslam, as well as, his Four friends were planning to visit the museum..
Aslam as well as his four friends were planning to visit the museum.
OR
Aslam and his four friends were planning to visit the museum.

correction;
aslam as well as his four friends was planning to visit the museum.


8. This is the youngest and most intelligent of my two sons.
This is the youngest and more intelligent of my two sons.

correction;
this is the youngest and the more intelligent of my two sons.

9. He is one of those who always succeed.
He is one of them who always succeed.

correction;
he is one of those people who always succeed.

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