Brother thesis statement is given always in intro..then after intro you have to prove it through examples in paragraphs.which you placed it in your intro

Pleasure of idlness. Intro. What Pleasures in indleness only. 1 mental pleasure how.? A pleasure to medidate what lost and what gain and what can be done to gain and what should not be done to gain 2 a chance of relaxation from from mental tensions pressures 2 physical pleasure how? Idleness brings soothing effect for your muscles to relax 2 and provide you a mean to keep yourself healthy through exercise 3 spiritually how? An opportunity to search within you a life of mystery - a subconscious cross section 4 morally how? A pleasure to see what immoral practices brought you down and up 2 what would be its impacts 1 foresighted 2 focused 3 discipline 4 determined 5 auspicious. 3 conclusion

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