Originally Posted by hazelnut

Thanks all for response. I had joined an academy for CSS. i showed my teacher this intro for UNSC essay
"the wounds were still fresh. Humanity was still aching of the unforgettable suffering the second world war caused.And in San Francisco,behind the close doors,those who felt the need to never let another war happen, sat.Finally, they reached their conclusion and the UN was formed. the makers of UN envisioned an international organistaion to save the future generations from the scourage of wars. They drafted an impeccable charter and erected an exceptional organistion. But......."
Rest is the outline of essay. so he did nt reject it right away and said i am getting your psychology. But did nt encourage me as well and told me to play safe. so lets read between the lines and go more the conventional style