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Originally Posted by alirazakh
Pollution and ways to combat it
Outline
1. Pollution-an introductory view
1.1. Major kinds of pollution
1.1.1. Air pollution
1.1.2. Soil Pollution
1.1.3. Water Pollution
1.2. Noise pollution-an emerging concept
1.3. Pollution-an upcoming threat for the planet
2. Causes of pollution-for remedies we must know
3. Detrimental effects- why is the stalemate necessary to pollution
4. Pragmatic ways to combat it- a way forward
5. Conclusion-an end but not an end in itself rather a beginning
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Outline matters a lot in essay paper.
Examiner don't have enough time to go through every paper thoroughly, i am saying this based on the papers he checked this year, he goes through the papers of those candidates who have potential in their outline.
your outline consist 9 segments that are related to pollution only, instead the essay requires ways to combat it. This is the main mistake you have committed.