1) Give Conclusion instead solutions.
2) As you're comparing both Islam & West, you should put information according to following standard structure for: Compare & Contrast type of the Essay.
* Introduction
* Body
Subject A — Point #1 _____________
Supporting detail ____________
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Subject B — Point #1 ________________
Supporting detail ________________
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Subject A — Point #2 _______________
Supporting detail _______________
Example ____________________
Subject B — Point #2 _______________
Supporting detail _____________________
Example _________________________
Subject A — Point #3 _________________
Supporting detail _______________________________________
Example _______________________________________
Subject B — Point #3 _______________________________________
Supporting detail _______________________________________
Example _______________________________________
* Conclusion
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Or do you think that the Fellows of the Cave and the Inscription were of Our Signs wonderful?
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