[QUOTE=Ambivalent;890020]I agree with your point of view. I am not negating the angle you have taken of this essay. I just want to share that the rule of thesis statement is to tell the reader what your essay is going to be about; you have to make your point particular rather than keeping yourself general on a topic, in general you are, however, more on a safe side. Your points and outline were great. I appreciate your participation and let us see what angle would you take in the next essay.


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