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Originally Posted by waqarabbasi
Thank you so ver much for reviewing.turning something to account is an idiom , and the second line should be written as ' the individual and collective success '. I will upload some paragraphs of the essay. you please upload your outline so we may get a better understanding of your introduction. and one thing more, rate my essay as grade A,B or C. I just wanna know how much still have to work for coming through.
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Instead of rating I think strict marking would be good. Marking everything out of 10 would let us know what is our worth, with making 4 the massing marks.
I will write my outline in the end when few other will post theirs.