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Originally Posted by faiza rajput
I, myself, am not very good in essay yet. I said this because I have read your previous introductions and they were felt very articulate, cohesive and specific on reading. However, while reading this one, I felt, something is missing. Maybe I am wrong. Other member would comment better than me.  |
You're right. Previous introductions were richer in expression. But I think this one is also sufficiently OK.
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