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Originally Posted by princeling
ok fine brother . and if i write 'pakistan unstable and weak politics are the primary cause of fragile economy' in place of 'why pakistan is still not successful'..will it work fine ?
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My friend,
No, in my opinion it won't work.
Your whole outline is stating only examples.
K yahan yeh ho gya, wahan wo ho gya.
This is general knowledge, not argumentation.
Use your general knowledge in the main body not outline.
Think in terms of ABSTRACT IDEAS.
Once you will train yourself thinking in terms of ideas and not examples, I'm sure that you'll make it.
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