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TITLE: LUXURY OF PREDECESSORS BECOMES NECESSITY OF SUCCESSORS

Introduction:

What constitutes a luxury in the past becomes a necessity of today.

[A] Difference Between A Luxury And A Necessity:

(i) Things having high costs and less availability, whose absence does not affect people negatively but whose presence brings pleasure, are labelled as luxuries.

(ii) Things that are essential for proper functioning of people are termed as necessities.

[B] How Luxuries Become Necessities Over Time:

1- Human beings are naturally inclined to adopt to ease.

2- Standards change with time and luxuries become necessities.

3- Mass production increases availability, decreases costs, and what was previously a luxury becomes a common public commodity and need.

4- With latest scientific advancements, the old become a necessity and the new become a luxury.

5- Parents provide their children with more than their actual needs and ultimately the latter becomes dependent on the luxuries of their predecessors.

6- Inheritance of wealth and knowledge from predecessors makes it easier for people to add more items on their list of necessities.

7- Successors misjudge the hardships of their ancestors and consider luxury of the latter as a necessity for themselves.

8- Repeated and early exposure to anything causes an addiction.

9- Changing scenarios also change meaning of things: peace which once was a luxury has become a necessity in the wake of advancement of nuclear arsenal.

10- The role of Genetics in making the luxury of one generation a necessity for others. ( We can write here: a recent scientific study proved that something luxurious which you like will be accepted in your DNA as okay, and once it passes to your offspring it then takes the shape of a necessity)

11- Ambitions to adopt the way of life of elders transform their luxuries into necessities of the Young ones.


Conclusion:

You are right. Topics like these are really hard to write on. What I think is that topics like these are risky in a sense that if your idea would fall short of examiner's views about such topic then all of the efforts can go in vain with failure in essay paper. Select the safest topics among the given 10 topics. Attempt the one for which you have the highest number of relevant points.

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Please jot down your idea on" Moral degradation:The by product of modernization
You jot down your ideas so that aspirants here would check and correct them

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Originally Posted by Chavonistic View Post
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Don't take any insult just from a post. All of us will evaluate your outline. Post your outline on the current topic.

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Originally Posted by waqarabbasi View Post
The luxury of predecessor becomes the necessity of the successor

Introduction
In the past, humans worked for food, shelter and cloth; today, they work for a refrigerator, TV, washing machine and a car. The successors of industrial revolutions have been addicted to the luxuries of the past. Luxuries are the necessities now.
A. Once comfort beyond the level of basic needs was a luxury
1. Electrical appliances were considered luxury items; common man was better off without them
2. The expensive books, news paper, art and dramas were considered the interests of high social class.
3. Food items like wheat, vegetables and meat were sufficient; jams, ketch up, pizzas and soft drinks were luxuries
4. Telephone and mobile phone were first a status symbol, a luxury then a need.

B. Luxuries of predecessors transformed the culture of necessities; the standards of need and luxury changed.

C. Needs underwent a change; luxuries became necessities.


D. The factors which transformed luxuries into necessities.

1. Easy availability of items
2. Peer pressure
3. Addiction to use
4. Human’s tendency to adopt to ease

E. the luxuries of predecessors have raised the material needs and wishes of successors.


f. No return to simple life is possible; coming generations will be more ease-loving and modern.

Conclusion

Your points are fine. Your introduction has decreased of the level you used to write. Don't drop the level of your writing. I mean last time you wrote great outline with great expressions. This introduction is a little bit like writing English after a long time.

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Originally Posted by faiza rajput View Post
Members, please evaluate my introduction. I will post my outline by evening IN SHAH ALLAH

Human nature is designed in such a way that it never set for less than the best, therefore, it always strive to achieve the best state of anything. It knows no return once a state is achieved. This is a one way path that way just goes forward. Keeping this in mind, one can say that what was previously achieved by someone as a result of extraordinary effort or intelligence, has now become the starting point for the person next to come. The person next in line has no choice but to take the struggle one step ahead or else would be eliminated from the race. To keep oneself relevant, not only continuous struggle is required but also it should be kept in mind that there is no place for a person who believe in reinventing the wheel. To be successful, it is required to take that wheel to the next level and then invent something more useful than that and so on. Hence it can be said with utmost authenticity that luxury of predecessor becomes the necessity of the successor.
Nice attempt

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Originally Posted by Abdullahali View Post
LUXURY OF PREDECESSORS BECOMES NECESSITY OF SUCCESSORS

“What one generation sees as a luxury, the next sees as a necessity” Anthony Crosland

1. Introduction

2. Transmutation of luxuries of predecessors as necessities of successors; a perennial process
a) Luxuries of primitive man are necessities of civilized man; food, cloth and shelter
b) Political luxuries of privileged few are fundamental necessities of common man; right to vote, to contest for a public office
c) Societal luxuries like security of life and property valued by predecessors are taken for granted as necessities
d) Technological luxuries; afforded by few in 20th century are personal possessions of everyone irrespective of economic and social class; phone,internet,tv,household products
e) Lifestyle luxuries of past generations ; recreation and entertainment are necessities of modern man

3. How luxury of one generation becomes necessity of the next; an insight into the process
a) Generation born with those “luxuries” takes them for granted
b) Demand and supply mechanism results in availability
c) Mass production of that luxury brings affordability
d) Changed social milieu perpetuate frequent use of those luxuries eventually translation them into necessities

4. Redefinition of luxuries and necessities; a hallmark of progress
a) It precludes complacency and hence intellectual stagnation
b) It manifests man’s inherent quest to get something better
c) Continuously striving suits human intellect

5. Today’s luxuries will become tomorrow’s necessities
“Luxury is a necessity that begins where necessity ends” Coco Chanel
6.conclusion
Nice attempt.

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Originally Posted by Abdullahali View Post
hello everyone , kudos to active members on this thread,this thread compelled me to make an account and join in,hopefully my contribution will be mutually beneficial for us. as the current topic is luxury of predecessors becomes necessity of successors, i will be posting my outline shortly for evaluation.
Welcome

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No need of headings
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Originally Posted by Chavonistic View Post
  • 1 intro
    mentioning your key points of introduction will enable the examiner to analyse how you have written them in your introduction and how will you write the rest of your essay afterwards.
    2 how punctuality is virtue of bored?
    * he gets rid of his idleness
    * to keep itself busy
    * to keep itself much absorbed and involved in work
    * to motivate itself
    * hence keep itself active out of purposelessness
    3 its impacts write complete sentence in the heading
    * clock like regularity due to inclination with work
    * you beat the clock sometimes due to obsession with work
    * beat the band because you are habituated or directed to be punctual
    * hence beat the system sometimes
    * and beat the pants
    4 end
Your points are good. You need to articulate your points in an improved manner, like the point ' clock like regularity due to inclination with work' can be written as, Strict Punctuality arises due to inclination towards work. Your sentence should be direct and should be striking.
Keep trying and posting.
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