Originally Posted by safeer khan

Nice. Nothing is irrelevant. (Y)

But it could be a lot better by reducing the length of the main headings.

And more importantly, I don't find any reflection of sequence of thought in the outline. I mean the next heading does not derive its purpose from the previous one.

And try to use consistent tense. See above I have pointed out where you mixed two tenses in one sentence and other suggestions.

And I'm just trying to be over critical. Overall a nice write-up.

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