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Old Saturday, January 09, 2016
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Originally Posted by hazelnut View Post
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The analysis of human nature will reveal that there are two powers in man upon which rely his thought and action: the power of enlightenment and the power of feeling. A poet possesses extraordinary power of feeling, and under its effect he gives life to verse. But many poets lack the power of enlightenment. Hence their poetry is short-lived, temporary and of emotional type. It's effect is not long-lasting. Very few poet's poetry is influenced by both powers: the power of feeling and the power of enlightenment. Only those poets are great and eternal and their message is unfettered by the limits of time and place.
good hazelnut; I do not find any mistakes in your translation.

what's your opinion about my passage; I have oversimplified some sentences.
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