Originally Posted by exclusively

Although it is a good attempt, yet you need to work on a quality answer. I mean you should start your answer with a quotation, because this type of questions need quoataions with little historical background. Apart from that, divide your answer into headings and sub-headings to ease your reader, the reader has to check hundreds of copies, he would likely be no longer interested in reading long paragraphs. If I were you, I would have attepted it in the follwoing headings:

-Introduction

-Definition of Ideology

-Definition of "Ideology of Pakistan"

-Historical background

-Ideology of Pakistan under the spot light of Quaid-e-Azam:
-Ambassador of "Unity" & empirical realities
-Advocate of Ideology of Pakistan
-Propounded Two Nation Theory
-Ultimate separate electorate mission
-Pakistan Resolution

-Ideology of Pakistan: Dream of Allama Iqbal
-Vision for a separate home land
-Assertion of Two Nation Theory
-Legacy of pure nationalism
-Doctrine of Islamic Ideology
-Demarcation of India: Allahabad Address

-Critical Analysis

-Conclusion

While attempting paper, must sketch down your outlines in the last pages of the answer copy, then go for attempt.

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