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Tiltle: DOES FOREIGN AID HELP TO ACHIEVE ECONOMIC STABILITY?

PREAMBLE:

Foreign aid cannot play any meaningful role to achieve economic stability due to inherent shortcomings of the concept.

[A] The Misperception: Foreign aid can do wonders.

[B] The Reality: Foreign aid is insignificant to achieve economic growth and stability.

[C] Flaws Found In The Concept Of Foreign Aid:


1- Unreliable supply
2- Too little to be meaningful
3- Channels of supply such as NGOs are not transparent
4- Cannot reach the poor due to control of elites
5- Give rise to patronage system
6- Mostly military aid which has no bearing on economic stability
7- Civilian aid also comes with restriction on spending
8- Deteriorates National morale
9- Hamper National image in the community of nations
10- Adversely affect Foreign Direct Investment
11- Easy come, easy go!

[D] Alternate ways to achieve economic stability:

(i) Solid Internal Economic Reforms and Foundation
(ii) Emphasis on Foreign Direct Investment

Encapsulation:



wrote outline on page 1-2, essay on 3-13,
approximate word count: 1700-1800
WELL WRITTEN SAFEER.

This is my write up. Please take a look. Other forum members can also comment. Thank you


CRISES OF GOOD GOVERNAMCE IN PAKISTAN: NEED FOR REFORMS AND INSTIUTION BUILDING

“Missiles can tell terrorists. But I am convinced that good governance is that what will kill terrorism”

United Nations
Secretary General Ban ki Moon

Outline :-

Introduction:

1) Pre-requisite of Good Governance
1.1) Consensus Oriented
1.2) Accountability
1.3) Transparency
1.4) Responsive
1.5) Equitable and Inclusive
1.6) Effective and Efficient
1.7) Follow the rule of law
1.8) Participatory

2. Crises of Good Governance in Pakistan


2.1) Loopholes criminal Justice system
2.2) Obsolete Police Ordinance
2.3) Slow implementation on National Action Plan
2.4) Lack of coordination between institution
2.5) Clash of media and dismal role of PEMRA
2.6) FATA Reforms and flaw in Article 247 (3) and sub section (7) of Constitution of Pakistan
2.7) Inefficient Public institution and lacking adaptation technologically
2.8) Public schools and no follow up on Article 25-A (Free education) in Pakistani schools

3. Need for Reforms and Institution building


3.1) Revamp Criminal Justice system
3.2) Capacity building of Police and reconsider obsolete police ordinance
3.3) Promote coordination and cooperation between institutions
3.4) Participation of people in national matters viz-a-viz foreign policy etc
3.5) PEMRA must be vigilant and censure glorification on banned outfits
3.6) Inviolability of constitution particularly related to masses must be feasible, Article 25, Equality of citizen, Article 3, elimination of exploitation, Article 34, Full participation of woman in national life and Article 37 promotion of social justice etc.
3.7) Tax collection must be regulated and sources of funds should be monitored as per section 165-A, income tax ordinance 2001 to abstain suspicious transaction reports.
3.8) Renovate public schools and highly trained teachers should be recruited on merit
3.9) Uniformity on national curriculum swiftly implemented for future coexistence and peace

4. Conclusion:


To make this great state of Pakistan. We should wholly and solely concentrate on the well being of the masses and especially for the poor and you are free to go to your temples, mosques and churches in this great state of Pakistan”
QUAID E AZAM MUHAMMAD ALI JINNAH


Ended with quote and wrote 10 and half pages including outline

In 2014, I secured 45, this time my approach was completely different lets see.

Last edited by Bonaparte; Thursday, February 18, 2016 at 10:14 PM. Reason: typo
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