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Old Tuesday, February 23, 2016
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Originally Posted by Zainab S View Post
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"most British style guides discourage use of the serial comma unless the items in the series would be confusing without it."

http://grammar.about.com/od/rs/g/serialcommaterm.htm

http://www.grammarly.com/handbook/pu.../oxford-comma/

http://grammar.wikia.com/wiki/Oxford_comma

What you are suggesting is something completely different. I'll forward his to my teacher but the thing is sleeping bag is a specific type of bag. Replacing it with just a bag won't be a plausible solution because then it can be any bag.

When should we use oxford comma,
http://www.grammarly.com/blog/2015/w...much-about-it/

This explains when it will be necessary to absolutely use oxford comma.

See this is why we are fretting over style guide. It can be quite confusing.
Do you know I also follow APA style of wring:here problem is not comma,because bag,tent and cooler might be of same thing.it has sentence parallelism problem
Let's have a look on this
https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/623/01/
I hope it will fix the problem.
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