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Originally Posted by waqarhassan
deal fellow... you are missing the basic point in this essay. keep yourself within the limits of the topic. its about the hurdles hindering Pakistan to become a truly independent state but you are focusing else where .
be precise and to the point. focus should be on Pakistan .
plus try to understand the topic and then write your essay.
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Dear brother, thanks for your comments. Truly grateful !! What if i alter the essay as follows:
Essay Topic: "What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state?"
1. Introduction
2. Obstruction in the path of true independence
a. Threat to state sovereignty and territorial Integrity
b. Military Strength under international criticism
c. Poverty and illiteracy
d. Political and institutional instability
e. Tarnished international image
f. Lacking economic stoutness and investment opportunities
g. Dearth of resourceful population/Under resourced population
h. Lack of implementation of International Law
i. Hegemony of world powers and their dictatorial attitude
j. Biased attitude of world community
i) Palestine Issue: Territorial Integrity and misuse of power
ii) Kashmir Issue: Right of self determination sidelined
k) Lack of seriousness towards human development
3. How can true independence be achieved ?
a. Respect of state sovereignty and territorial integrity at global and regional level
b. Effective participation of regional and world organizations in promoting and guarding state's independence
c. Discrmination towards states needs to be stopped
d. Equal opportunities to all for attaining prosperity and welfare
e) Focus towards human development
f) Creating positive image on international and regional level
4. Conclusion