Originally Posted by jamalnasir

Dear I didn't contradicted the main statement. The topic was, "gender equality is a myth" means that there is no gender equality. Those who say that all genders are being treated equally are actually misguided as rights of all genders are being violated at different scales. While proving the statement I mentioned in introduction that we have legislated laws like article 25 (2), but haven't implemented. Then I wrote "Almost everywhere there is discrimination on the basis of gender. Rights of each gender being infringed and violated." Later mentioned many examples where gender's rights are being violated like mostly families instead of giving education to eunuchs, they exclude them from house while forcing them to be beggars.

Yes the major part of essay focused on Pakistan, but I also mentioned the issues of other countries, I didn't omitted completely the world's issues. In almost start I mentioned about UNDHR. Later I mentioned that how males face inequality in some fields of life, because in gender issues we can't neglect males, as they are also a part of genders. After taking a glance at third gender, I again focused on females' issues. Then I gave the examples of the United States and the United Nations. At last, before conclusion, I mentioned about Muslim countries. So dear you can't say that I only focused on Pakistan. Here is the outline of essay.

Outline

A= Abstract
B= Introduction
C= what is gender equality?
D= Major forms of gender and their level of equality
i: Male
ii: Female
iii: Eunuch
E= Areas of life where there is no gender equality
i: At home
ii: In government offices
iii: In private institutions
iv: In armed forces
v: In Parliaments
F= Gender inequality in Pakistan
G= Gender inequality in the world
i: In America
ii: In the UNO
iii: In Muslim World
H= Suggestions
i: Open psychological treatment centers
ii: Share in husband salary
iii: Opening of schools for Eunuchs
iv: Provide full education
I= Conclusion

Yes dear I have watched this video, before that didn't know that Naveed Akram Cheema did BA with third division.

Thanks brother for your detailed analysis.

By the way even I am an aggrieved candidate, but after result, before doing anything else, I offered two rakat Nafil because I am sure that something better is written for me.