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Topic: Gender Equality is a myth!

Introduction
Defining Gender
What is Gender Equality
Why Gender Equality is a myth?
Gender encompasses every facet of life
1. Baby Boy or Baby Girl - Gender starts at the birth
2. Gender at home
3. Gender at School
4. Gender at Career selection
5. Gender at Workplace
6. Gender in Society
7. Gender at National Level
8. Gender at Global Level
Gender Equality in Pakistan
How Condition in Pakistan can be improved?
Conclusion

I got 23.

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