Presic title of CSS 2015 Precis and Composition Paper
 

"Development of War in civilization and its cures"
I want your comments on my precis title. Is it correct or not? I have seen many titles on this forum but mine is a little bit different. So please share your opinions whether I have rightly understood the paragraph or not.

[QUOTE=Farrukh Mahmood;865372]"Development of War in civilization and its cures"
I want your comments on my precis title. Is it correct or not? I have seen many titles on this forum but mine is a little bit different. So please share your opinions whether I have rightly understood the paragraph or not.[/QUOTE]
Mine title is "Perception of War and Civilization"

[QUOTE=its possible;866009]Second para has been misinterpreted by many aspirants.[/QUOTE]

First para was about the Evils of War, and Second para was about preventive measures or strategies to avoid war, or mitigate the resulting ills/sufferings caused by those evils.

I think first para was abut the development of war in a civilization. It tells us that how gradualy war penetrate in a civilization and how it holds and shapes the events of within a civilization. I think the basic idea was nt to tell the adverse effects of war but to tell it finds its way into a civilization. Second para was abut remedial work ofcourse

[QUOTE=Farrukh Mahmood;866021]I think first para was abut the [B]development of war [/B]in a civilization. It tells us that how gradualy war penetrate in a civilization and how it holds and shapes the events of within a civilization. I think the basic idea was nt to tell the adverse effects of war but to tell it finds its way into a civilization. Second para was abut remedial work ofcourse[/QUOTE]

It was not exactly about the development of war, instead the focus of writer was on the [B]breakdown[/B] of civilizations due to [B]war[/B], but mostly the emphasis was on the detrimental effect of war and on factors that causes war; among them, he pointed out the benefits of concurring power and wealth . So, in my opinion, the title "development of war in a civilization" does not reflect much about the theme of given precis.

You seemed right to me now. However i still believe that writer was trying to tell us that in the early phase war does not hold civilization. Then gradual development in civilization develops war. So i think my title holds relevance. It is my perception but your argument holds the point as wel

[QUOTE=Farrukh Mahmood;865372]"Development of War in civilization and its cures"
I want your comments on my precis title. Is it correct or not? I have seen many titles on this forum but mine is a little bit different. So please share your opinions whether I have rightly understood the paragraph or not.[/QUOTE]

Title: Breakdown of civilization and war