check my preci 2015
 

[CENTER][/CENTER][B][B]War inimical to human civilization[/B][/B]
War has always been found out as the main cause of destruction of civilized societies throughout the course of history. In early age war seemed more reasonable to states as its benefits outweighed its devastations thus, states indulged in war without fearing its consequences. War has a subtle yet harmful way of making people war addicts eventually. War not only feeds upon the state’s economy and government regime through, exhausting large share of state resources and human resources, but also destructs people’s living standards. In modern times war has become even more harmful due to advent of nuclear age and modern weaponry. Consequently, it is crucial for safety human life to remove this ever-spreading disease. However, history after facing wars has highlighted that this damage to civilization and human race can be avoided through two different ways; individuals can either refuse personal engagement in war i.e. a selfless sentiment or individual and government’s collective effort to abandon warfare for peace. Experience advocates that second solution proves to be more efficient.

This forum is reduced to a platform for gossip, rumours and job postings. It is useless to post your work on this forum. Either nobody bothers to check your work or if someone does his own competence as a checker is doubtful. It is better that you find a good friend or a competent teacher who can check your work.

I completely agree with you, but the problem is that I do not have a friend or a partner for css preparation.

Then I would recommend that you look for any good teacher in your area. Someone who has good reputation in such things. Besides, I am sharing my attempt of the same precis, so to give something to you to compare your precis with.

[B]Title: Extent of War in a Civilization[/B]

War is the most likely cause of downfall of a civilization and writer aims at studying its nature and extent. The institution of war turns into a lethal phenomenon when it becomes evident that that the society cannot escape from its hold. Historically, war was a desirable act for a nation because its payoffs exceeded its costs. And the nations were not accountable for their actions in a war. War becomes a viable mean to further the interests when nations achieve a degree of economic stability and political organization. But when war is carried out, it drains out the nation’s economic and political resources and puts disastrous impacts on human lives. Resultantly, war becomes a tumor unless nation decides not to exercise it. Similarly, in past, when war seemed inevitable, energies were put to thwart it by using either of the two options: by refusing to go the war at individual level-refuting the state or by persuading state to resolve conflict through peaceful means. And experience entails that the latter option has been more rewarding.

Thankyou. i think your attempt is way better than mine

What are your optionals?

Political science
Business administration
USA history
Anthropology
Stuck between environmental science\ mercantile law \ philosophy

I would advise to choose between Env. Science and Mercantile law, If you have studied Mercantile law previously.

i have an introductory knowledge of mercantile law, I'm considering to opt it as every other person is opting environmental science.