Plz rectify and re-write

[zaib]

Passing through ten different cities, Karachi is the most active.

1.He was laid up for six weeks with two broken ribs.

2.Someone showed the visitors in the room.

3.Until you remain idle you will make no progress.

4.It is very wrong to be devoted to lying and cheating.

5.He told me that he is waiting for me since a long time.

6.The .house stood up in the dull street because of its red door.

7.He brought the articles to the market which he wanted to sell.

[fatima3k]

assalam-u-alaikum
i am not sure about answers, so plz correct them if wrong

Having Passed through ten different cities,he found that Karachi was the most active.
1.He lay in bed for six weeks with two broken ribs.

2.Someone showed the visitors into the room.

3.If you remain idle , you will make no progress.
4.It is very wrong to be devoted to lying and cheating.

5.He told me that he had been waiting for me for a long time.

6.The house stood up in the dull street because of its red door.

7.He brought to the market the articles which he wanted to sell.


regards

1.He broke two ribs and was laid up for six weeks.
2.Someone led the visitors into the room.
3.Until you remain idle,you would make no progress
4.It is very bad to always cheat and lie.
5.He told me that he was waiting for me for a long time.
6.The house with a red door stood up in a dull street.
7.He brought the articles which he wanted to sell in the market
Might be wrong,I would really highly appreciate corrections if any
Maa salam

[Dritte Reich]

1.He was laid up for six weeks with two broken ribs.

2.Someone showed the visitors in the room.
Someone showed the visitors in
3.Until you remain idle you will make no progress.
As long as you remain idle you will make no progress
4.It is very wrong to be devoted to lying and cheating.
It is very wrong to be lying and cheating
5.He told me that he is waiting for me since a long time.
He told me that he was waiting for me for a long time
6.The .house stood up in the dull street because of its red door.
The house stood out in the dull street because of its red door.
7.He brought the articles to the market which he wanted to sell.
He brought to the market the articles he wanted to sell.