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[salemani]

One of the biggest problems that pakistan faces today is Terrorism.

Terrorism has been one of the biggest problems that Pakistan faces today.\

Terrorim has been one of the gravest problems that we are facing toay.

Pakistan is facing many problemes, among them poverty is one, which has made our country distrubed.

The real cause of poverty is Overpopualtion. Overpopulation is ..........

Overpouplation is cause of poverty, due to overpopulation.........


The real cause of terrorims is talibans who are threatening our country.



Please check our my senteces, and tell me which are good for essay to start my sentences?

[salemani]

Earth is becoming warm day by day.


Earth becomes warm day by day.


Earth is being warmed day by day..



The meain cause of global warming is warming of the earth since 140 years.

Since the inception of Pakistan, our country has been facing a lot of problems.

Since the birth of our country, It has faced a lot of problems.

Since we have independent nation, we have faced a lot of problems.

Please check these sentences and point out my mistakes, and rewrite them in your own structure so that I can be understood.

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