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dr.atifrana Friday, March 20, 2009 06:14 PM

@Miss afrms
Thank you for such nice prayers.I am eagerly looking for your suggestions and comments on this passege.We are too thankful to you for your taking out of precsious time from your life for us.May Allah bless you
Regds

AFRMS Saturday, March 21, 2009 12:02 PM

Salam
@dr atif rana
its a very good attempt.you have done well.dont worry after 2-3 more para you will managed it under an hour.your target must be 45-50 min.
i think you answers are ok i did little addition just a little.

Poetry the language of the imagination and the passion because it talks about human pleasures and pain,it depicts ones feelings and thoughts.

It is the universal language of the heart because every body in this world feels the same feelings of love, hatred , anger or any other type of feeling in the same way as others do and almost thinks in the same way as others think although their views differ .And poetry depicts all these emotions and feelings.

History only records the events and affairs of life and is quite borring and difficult to understand. It is replete with statistic and figures and is devoid of any feeling.Where as poetry is interesting and depicts your emotions and thoughts.

The writter says that without poetry man is beast and it is poetry which develops his thoughts and feelings and ultimately brings him to the status of poetical animal.Poetry refines and enlightens human mind .He is trying to make us understand that those who dont like poetry actually have no respect for themselves and world around them.

He calls a child poet when he plays hide and seek or when he repeates some story; he calls the newly wed shepherd_boy a poet when he imagines his wife as a queen;he calls a courtier a poet when he courts his patron and so on.The writer says that everyone makes their own world and live life accordingly,poet only describes their thoughts and actions.

best wishes

regards.

dr.atifrana Saturday, March 21, 2009 07:30 PM

@afrms
Thanks for the appreciation.I tried my best in this passege keeping in mind all the tips but again it took about 70 minutes .kindly check this and tell me what you opine on this.I think I have found the key .First of all I read it 4 to 5 times and then tried to give answers myself, it really worked.

2. Read the given passage, then give brief answers, to the questions placed at the end, in your own words: - (20)

There is indeed, something inexpressibly pleasing in the annual renovation of the world and the new display of the treasures of nature. The darkness and cold of winter with the naked deformity of every object, on which we turn our eyes, make us rejoice at the succeeding season, as well for what we have escaped, as for what we may enjoy. Every budding Flower, which a warm situation brings early to our view, is considered by us a messenger to notify the approach of more joyous days.
The spring affords to a mind free from the disturbance of cares or passions almost everything that our present state makes us capable of enjoying. The Variegated Verdure of the fields and woods, the succession of grateful Odours, the Voice of pleasure pouring out its notes on every side, with the gladness apparently conceived by every animal from the growth of liis food and the clemency of the weather, throw over the whole. earth an air of gaiety, significantly expressed by Smile of nature.
(Samuel John Son)


Questions:
(a) Give meanings of the under lines expressions in the passage in your own words. (10)
(b) Say how an early budding flower becomes a messenger of happy days? (3)
(c) Who, according to the writer can make the best of the spring season? (3)
(d) Why are all animals glad at the approach of spring9 (3)
(e) Suggest a title for the passage. (I)

annual renovation:seasons follow a cycle in which one season overtakes another season one after an other and this cycle goes on.With the beginning of the spring a new cycle starts .spring renovates the world with flowers ,green fields and trees full of fruits .

Treasures of nature: these fruits, crops,flowers and clement weather are the treasures of nature.

Naked deformity: In winter trees become leafless and fruitless and fields remain uncultivated and without crops.

Succeeding season: here the writer is pointing to the spring season.

Warm situation: Here he means that just before the beginning of the spring season, weather changes as a pleasant warm breeze starts taking place of cold breeze of winter.

Veriegated verdure: here the variegated verdure means that we see many different types of vegetation and trees.

Grateful odours: its mean that we smell different types of pleasing fragrances due to the presence of these trees, vegetations and flowers .

Clemency of the weather: it means that we feel comfortable due to pleasant weather.

Air of gaiety :a feeling of happiness is felt by every one.

Smile of nature: here it means that the nature shows her blessings in the spring.


(b) Say how an early budding flower becomes a messenger of happy days? (3)

As an early buddling flower is the omen that the winter is at its culminations and the spring is near to its start. And spring is full blessings that are for every creature of this earth.

(c) Who, according to the writer can make the best of the spring season? (3)

Only a mind free from tensions can make the best of the spring season.



(d) Why are all animals glad at the approach of spring9 (3)

Because they know that in this season they will enjoy different kind of food.

(e) Suggest a title for the passage. (I)

blessings of the spring.


thanks.

dr.atifrana Saturday, March 21, 2009 07:37 PM

Sorry, I forgot to bold the words for question 1.
There is indeed, something inexpressibly pleasing in the [B]annual renovation [/B]of the world and the new display of the[B] treasures of nature[/B]. The darkness and cold of winter with the [B]naked deformity [/B]of every object, on which we turn our eyes, make us rejoice at the [B]succeeding season[/B], as well for what we have escaped, as for what we may enjoy. Every budding Flower, which a[B] warm situation [/B]brings early to our view, is considered by us a messenger to notify the approach of more joyous days.
The spring affords to a mind free from the disturbance of cares or passions almost everything that our present state makes us capable of enjoying. The [B]Variegated Verdure [/B]of the fields and woods, the succession of [B]grateful Odours[/B], the Voice of pleasure pouring out its notes on every side, with the gladness apparently conceived by every animal from the growth of liis food and the [B]clemency of the weather[/B], throw over the whole. earth[B] an air of gaiety[/B], significantly expressed by [B]Smile of nature.[/B](Samuel John Son)

(a) Give meanings of the under lines expressions in the passage in your own words. (10)

Baig1 Sunday, March 22, 2009 05:07 PM

salam friend ....need some paragraphs ...Plz share
 
.plz share PARAGRAPHS,if u have any?
as per my knowledge ....seniors in this forum are those who have cleared this exam....
but u are asking seniors to check your work.it looks that you havn`t cleared this exam....or you r using someone else account..
plz,reply this .i just want to confirm what is difference between a junior and senior on this forum. ...
also what is your status ?...


Regards...
Baig.....

God helps those who help others.....

dr.atifrana Sunday, March 22, 2009 06:38 PM

@Baig1
dear css qualifiers are those who have madels (specific madel for csp).I am a learner just like you.It is the number of posts which make you senior member.

rgds

AFRMS Sunday, March 22, 2009 08:49 PM

salam
@DR atif rana
i must say you have done very well,a very good attempt.like i said that i am not an expert but i didnt find any mistake.little change as follows
As an early budding flower is the omen that the winter is about to culminate and the spring is near to its start. And spring is full blessings that are for every creature of this earth.
capital letter for title.
Blessings of the Spring
regards

dr.atifrana Monday, March 23, 2009 05:27 PM

@Miss afrms
AOA, Thanks for the appreciation .One thing I have noted is that ,if one has enough vocabulary one can do very well in this paper.I think now I should practice some precis'. What is your say in this regard.

thanks

AFRMS Monday, March 23, 2009 06:19 PM

[quote=dr.atifrana]@Miss afrms
AOA, Thanks for the appreciation .One thing I have noted is that ,if one has enough vocabulary one can do very well in this paper.I think now I should practice some precis'. What is your say in this regard.

thanks[/quote]
salam
you are right good vocab helps not only in this paper but in essay also.
keep on practicing paragraphs every now and then.yes you should start precis. exercises of 7-8 para for precis is good enough.
best of luck.
regards


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