Criticise: Cowards die many times before their death.

[Chulbullpandey]

Please criticise my following idea expansion paragraphs. Seniors have seldom expressed their comments in this regard. Please guys, help me. I plan to appear next year. I am, desperately, longing for encouragement as well as constructive criticism. Please.

COWARDS DIE MANY TIMES BEFORE THEIR DEATH.

"It is better to live like lion for one day than living like jackal for a hundred years", said the great warrior of subcontinent, Maharaja Tipu Sultan while defending his homeland. It shows the extent of his bravery and courage. However, there are a few people who prefer the life of jackal over that of lion. The world calls them cowards.

Cowards are the people left with inability to cope with any problem they happen to encounter. They fall well short of the strength and valour, bravery and courage. It is only due to their cowardice that they have to die many times, unfortunately, before the actual departure of soul from their bodies.

As a matter of fact, the coward has to face the hostile world surrounding him at every step of his life. Consequently, he becomes skeptical of the people around him in order to conceal his own coward nature. His life becomes humiliating for him, in such a way. However, this is more painful than actual death.

More humiliating is the guilt that the coward grows in his heart for the want of courage. This guilt erodes his confidence necessary to live life. He becomes so dishearted that he considers himself too useless to fit anywhere. Then is started the battle between his conscience and the guilt he has developed. Owing to his cowardice, he loses the battle, ultimately, and dies once again before is commenced his death.

Therefore, in order to live in this world where the theory of "survival of the fittest" rules the roost, one must assimilate enough courage to face its gash realities. Resorting to cowardice will yield nothing but humiliation at every step of life. And hence will die the coward many times before his death.

[ravian786]

Good attempt....but need little attention on arrangement of content material

[UltimateCSP]

Nice attempt.
I think you need to add one or two examples from History where actually cowardice was the cause of failure.
It is my humble opinion and i am not an expert of it.

[Chulbullpandey]

Originally Posted by ravian786

Good attempt....but need little attention on arrangement of content material

Dear ravian786,
I'm very grateful to you for your service. I am trying my best to put my ideas in order. Under tid guidance of friends like you, I'm sure i'll improve. Thank you once again dear.

Originally Posted by Ultimate CSP

Nice attempt.
I think you need to add one or two examples from History where actually cowardice was the cause of failure.
It is my humble opinion and i am not an expert of it.

Hi UltimateCSP,
Thank you for your response dear. I deliberated alot. But I failed to reproduce any incident. Would you please enumerate a few for me? Thanks in advance. I would like everyone to read my other expansions and express their views so that I may learn more from my mistakes.