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[zuhaib ahmed]

The violence of war can be diluted with love (Expansion of 2011)

When there was no time, cause, season, theory and reason _ there was existence of love which is the most powerful and beyond everything. Human is pack of feelings; hatred begets war and war is consumed by love. Love is the most insurmountable emotion which has done miracles since time _it has brought wars into peace and hatred into affection. Indeed, violence of war can be diluted with love.

When Arab tribes were spreading violence of wars _hatred and aggregation were giving outlets to war’s fire. There, Prophet Mohammad PBUH with whiff of love extinguished war’s fire. He brought flow of love and brother-hood in every heart of Arabians which wiped all hatred and brought sympathy. War was weakened by eternal force of love and war was blown away; like a rotten leaf is flown away by tempest.

As a diamond is needed to cut mirror same love is needed to parish war. When war stands with war, then, violence reaches at its peaks. Two same sides of magnet ever repel each other and make distance. So, a war is not solution for war. One has to change one’s side to attract each other and that side is of love _only can be done by love. As universal saying is, “Love begets love.”

Love and humanity is essence of all religions of world. Religion is solution for entire human-kind and soul of religion is love. Love which breaks walls of hatred and brings ever flowing peace _It eradicates all differences. Violence of war was ever conquered by love; it is being conquered and will be conquered. As Virgil said, "Love conquers all."




By: Xuhaib Ahmed Pirzada The traveler 12-Feb-2012

[ArslanAli616]

Aoa,
Zuhaid I must appreciate your diction and dedication.

You have some issue with punctuation. Remember it is a tool to make thoughts clear.
Secondly, as I suggested yesterday, please consider phrasing short sentences.

Duaon ki Darkhuast,
Regards!

[zuhaib ahmed]

Originally Posted by ArslanAli616

Aoa,
Zuhaid I must appreciate your diction and dedication.

You have some issue with punctuation. Remember it is a tool to make thoughts clear.
Secondly, as I suggested yesterday, please consider phrasing short sentences.

Duaon ki Darkhuast,
Regards!

Thanks for appreciation.
I tried to add punctuation correctly. Where did i miss it and where had I to use and avoid?
Yes, short sentences are good, indeed. I have used short sentences except two or three to remain in flow.......

[pureapak]

nice effort.....

My expansion goes like this;

Violence is the painful persecution of one human at the hands of an other and war marks the higgest degree of it.
People enter the warfares after the humanitarian values in them cease to exist.
Tolerance, mutual benefit, equality and justice are some of the integral parts of the titanic human attitude, known as love.

Love is not just a feeling, it is the practice of compromise, receprocal trust, shared power and prestige, concerns and respect, joint need, desire and longing for one another.

Abuse of these social practices lead to exploitation, socio-political injustice, economic disequillbrium and the like various other evils.
Afghanistan, Pakistan , Palesine, Kashmir and recently Arab countries have become hubs of global violence. This is , in fact, a direct effect of certain vices perpetrated internationally.

On contrary, there is a number of mutual alliances in the world like UNO,OIC,E.U and other blocks which defend the members against violence.
Values of love bind them together and grant them shared success.

Love for mankind prevents human ferocity and helps develop a society devoid of victimization.

A lover is , therefore, the worst enemy of violence and wars. He is the one who opens opportunities for general welbeing of society.

As Anne-Sophie Swetchine puts it,

"To love deeply in one direction makes us more loving in all others "


The war-less conquest of Mecca is the greatest example of the Muslim's love for humanity which said no to the violence. The blood thirsty enemies were forgiven and were accomodated in society with love and respect.

People should give vent to the forces of love so that the humanity suffering violence world wide may be relived and the era of mutual co-existence may soon dawn the globe.

[ArslanAli616]

Originally Posted by zuhaib ahmed

Thanks for appreciation.
I tried to add punctuation correctly. Where did i miss it and where had I to use and avoid?
Yes, short sentences are good, indeed. I have used short sentences except two or three to remain in flow.......

Here's how I would do it!

When there was no time, cause, season, theory and reason _ there was existence of love (,) which is the most powerful and beyond everything. Human is pack of feelings; hatred begets war and war is consumed by love. Love is the most insurmountable emotion which has done miracles since time(.) It has brought wars into peace and hatred into affection. Indeed, violence of war can be diluted with love.

(Before Islam) Arab tribes were spreading (overwhelmed by) violence of wars(,) and hatred and aggregation were giving outlets to war’s fire. (Holy) Prophet Mohammad (PBUH) with whiff of love extinguished war’s fire. He (PBUH) brought flow of love and brother-hood in every heart of Arabians which wiped all hatred and brought sympathy. War was weakened by (the) eternal force of love and was blown away; like a rotten leaf is flown away by tempest.

As a diamond is needed to cut mirror(,) (likewise) love is needed to parish war. When war stands with war, then, violence reaches at its peaks. Two (similar) sides of magnet ever repel each other and make distance. So, a war is not solution for war. One has to change one’s side to attract each other and that side is of love. As universal saying is, “Love begets love.”

Love and humanity is essence of all religions of world. Religion is solution for entire human-kind and soul of religion is love. Love (is the power) which breaks walls of hatred and brings ever flowing peace(.) _It eradicates(minimizes) differences, (and engraves tolerance). Violence of war was ever conquered by love(,) it is being conquered and will be conquered. As Virgil said, "Love conquers all."


Hope I made my point clear.

Duaon ki darkhuast!
Regards.

[zuhaib ahmed]

Thanks, Dear. Where I had used underscore, you gave a full stop. But, I had given underscore to empathize the ideas or I was changing the idea.

"there was existence of love (,) which is the most powerful and beyond everything."

Comma doesn't come before a relative noun. As you have given.

(and engraves tolerance) what does it mean?


Thanks, Dear. Keep on guiding.

Originally Posted by pureapak

nice effort.....

My expansion goes like this;

Violence is the painful persecution of one human at the hands of an other and war marks the higgest degree of it.
People enter the warfares after the humanitarian values in them cease to exist.
Tolerance, mutual benefit, equality and justice are some of the integral parts of the titanic human attitude, known as love.

Love is not just a feeling, it is the practice of compromise, receprocal trust, shared power and prestige, concerns and respect, joint need, desire and longing for one another.

Abuse of these social practices lead to exploitation, socio-political injustice, economic disequillbrium and the like various other evils.
Afghanistan, Pakistan , Palesine, Kashmir and recently Arab countries have become hubs of global violence. This is , in fact, a direct effect of certain vices perpetrated internationally.

On contrary, there is a number of mutual alliances in the world like UNO,OIC,E.U and other blocks which defend the members against violence.
Values of love bind them together and grant them shared success.

Love for mankind prevents human ferocity and helps develop a society devoid of victimization.

A lover is , therefore, the worst enemy of violence and wars. He is the one who opens opportunities for general welbeing of society.

As Anne-Sophie Swetchine puts it,

"To love deeply in one direction makes us more loving in all others "


The war-less conquest of Mecca is the greatest example of the Muslim's love for humanity which said no to the violence. The blood thirsty enemies were forgiven and were accomodated in society with love and respect.

People should give vent to the forces of love so that the humanity suffering violence world wide may be relived and the era of mutual co-existence may soon dawn the globe.

Quite, Well. CSPs and Seniors should check both expansions and tell us about our mistakes. hai na?

[ArslanAli616]

Well Zuhaib, I am not in this deep understanding of "whether comma may or may not be placed before a relative noun".
As I have mentioned in one of my previous comments on your posts, we can not afford to be that much certain as to become authoritative. To me, the statement "Love eradicates differences" is not gratifying. We may express it as "Love minimizes differences and engraves tolerance (Tolerance for the differences, obviously)", as differences can not be eradicated at large.

Regards.

[zuhaib ahmed]

Originally Posted by ArslanAli616

Well Zuhaib, I am not in this deep understanding of "whether comma may or may not be placed before a relative noun".
As I have mentioned in one of my previous comments on your posts, we can not afford to be that much certain as to become authoritative. To me, the statement "Love eradicates differences" is not gratifying. We may express it as "Love minimizes differences and engraves tolerance (Tolerance for the differences, obviously)", as differences can not be eradicated at large.

Regards.

Thanks, Dear.
What do you think how I have justified the topic?

[SADA LAL]

The violence of war can be diluted with love (Expansion of 2011)





When there was no time, cause, season, theory and reason _ (omit this sign or attribute comma) there was existence of love which is (was) the most powerful and beyond everything. Human is pack of feelings; hatred begets war (it is not compulsory to use comma but should be utilized)and war is consumed by love. Love is the most insurmountable emotion which has done miracles since time _it has brought wars into peace and hatred into affection. Indeed, violence of war can be diluted with love.

When Arab tribes were spreading violence of wars _hatred and aggregation were giving outlets to war’s fire. There, Prophet Mohammad PBUH with whiff of love extinguished war’s fire(when arab tribes were spreading violence of war,hatred,and aggregation,then Prophet Muhammed PBUH with whiff of love extinguished the fire of war). He brought flow of love and brother-hood in every heart of Arabians which wiped all hatred and brought sympathy. War was weakened by eternal force of love and war was blown away ; (not use semicolon here) like a rotten leaf is flown away by tempest.

As a diamond is needed to cut mirror same love is needed to parish war. When war stands with war, then, (omit comma) violence reaches at its peaks. Two same sides of magnet ever repel each other and make distance. So, a war is not solution for war. One has to change one’s side to attract each other and that side is of (omit preposition) love _only can be done by love. As universal saying is, “Love begets love.” (one has to change one's concept to attract each other by disseminating love only can be done by love)

Love and humanity is (are) essence of all religions of world.(Every) Religion is solution for entire human-kind and soul of religions is love. Love which breaks walls of hatred and brings ever flowing peace _It eradicates all differences. (the) Violence of war was ever conquered by love; it is being conquered and will be conquered. As Virgil said, "Love conquers all.(The violence of war was ever conquered by love,is being conquered,and will be conquered)

[zuhaib ahmed]

Thanks. Indeed, it is not infallible. I shall work on punctuation as already told by Arslan. I want to ask. How have i justified the topic and Where Have I derailed? This is what I want to know.