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Man probes into space but not into himself


The more time passes the more man goes away of self. He enters into materialistic world and space, and keeps away from spirituality and self. The self which is essence, but it is neglected. Man has discovered atom and stars but has never seen into himself. Self has supernatural secrets to tell, but man is busy with space. He discovers outer world but avoids inner mysteries .

All the Sufi, mystics and wise people said to know "self". They discovered the real quest. The great philosopher Socrates says, " Know thyself."Self tells all things. When one knows self, he knows the nature. However, man is looking at things in world and cosmos and doesn't peep into himself. Rumi Says, "Everything in the universe is within you. Ask all from yourself."

The great philosopher and universal poet Moulana Jalaldeen Rumi tried to find God on Cristian Cross; he went at Hindu temples and pagodas, he searched into cave Hira; he went into Kaba and Macca, he looked into vallies and mountains, but God was not into heights and depths. Then, he sought into himself into his heart, and God was present. As Baba Bulleh Shah says, "You run to enter your mosques and temples, but you never entered your own heart."

Man discovers photons but doesn't probe into himself. He tries to live on mars but doesn't want to see life of self. He tries to know where planet Pluto is gone but doesn't want to know where he is derailed. He discovers planets like super-earth but doesn't look for the fact. And, Indeed, man probes into space not into himself.Bulleh Shah says, "We have drowned in the river of Self."





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Nice attempt as usual Zuhaib, you have an interest in mysticism and Sufism that is reflected from the selection of your topics.As far as these topics are concerned, you can express your ideas very well and your basic English grammar, sentence structure and vocabulary is fine.I would suggest you that try to select some current affairs topics or the factual ones to prepare yourself in all the dimensions and aspects. best of luck
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Nice attempt as usual Zuhaib, you have an interest in mysticism and Sufism that is reflected from the selection of your topics.As far as these topics are concerned, you can express your ideas very well and your basic English grammar, sentence structure and vocabulary is fine.I would suggest you that try to select some current affairs topics or the factual ones to prepare yourself in all the dimensions and aspects. best of luck
Thanks, Sis. Yes, I love to write on literary topics and that which relate to mysticism and Sufism. I will start writing on some current affairs topic too.
Thanks for appreciation.
I had written current affairs topic Debacle of east-Pakistan.
Check it,Sis.
http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compu...s-plz-chk.html
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That attempt is also commendable, so keep it up.
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its really nice and once you have started reading you dont get bored till the end. The transition from one quote to another is very synchronized. In fact it inspired me to write something. Good job.
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its really nice and once you have started reading you dont get bored till the end. The transition from one quote to another is very synchronized. In fact it inspired me to write something. Good job.
Thanks. That is what I Believe, one should write in flow and words should create music. And, the simplest words should be used so that layman can also understand.
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Commendable work bro. I 'll 2nd sabahatbhutta that "In fact it inspired me to write something"...
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