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Kamran Friday, February 25, 2011 02:20 AM

[QUOTE=Eager;270876]guys need to ask one thing, ab sb yahin hain tou yahin puch leti hun. can we use remover/correction pens in exams??[/QUOTE]

Well,I think ke ink removers/correction pens aren't allowed in exams.And personally I don't find any good reason to use them either.

Regards.

mhmmdkashif Friday, February 25, 2011 02:23 AM

[QUOTE=Kamran;270886]Well,I think ke ink removers/correction pens aren't allowed in exams.And personally I don't find any good reason to use them either.

Regards.[/QUOTE]

Thats correct, just do brainstorming for 10 minutes with pencil on a rough page before starting to write the original answer, and you wont need to use correction, right??

Farrah Zafar Friday, February 25, 2011 02:27 AM

wo bhayanak saal tha 2007:cry
Insha Allah is saal mera student will rock:dd.

Here come sentences:

The amount they receive in wages is greater [B]than that of [/B]twenty years ago.
They succeeded [B](with)[/B] hardly making any effort.
Whatever have you done[B]?[/B]shyed ever bhi remove hona hai?
The officers were given places according to their [B](respective)[/B] ranks.:unsure:

[QUOTE]Parso?Are you sure??today is 25th feb na.[/QUOTE]
oops acha G..ab ijazat Sir syed yad ferma ry hon gy:D
TC both

Eager Friday, February 25, 2011 02:45 AM

[QUOTE=Kamran;270886]Well,I think ke ink removers/correction pens aren't allowed in exams.And personally I don't find any good reason to use them either.

Regards.[/QUOTE]

but i am in a very bad habit of making mistakes frequently :confused::confused:

mhmmdkashif Friday, February 25, 2011 02:47 AM

[QUOTE=Eager;270900]but i am in a very bad habit of making mistakes frequently :confused::confused:[/QUOTE]

Just use them if they are allowed to be taken in the exam hall, baqi Allah malik hai :vic

Yes from Hyderabad :D

Eager Friday, February 25, 2011 02:49 AM

[QUOTE=mhmmdkashif;270903]
Yes from Hyderabad :D[/QUOTE]

good!! main bhi :):)
centre??

mhmmdkashif Friday, February 25, 2011 02:51 AM

SPSC Hall Block B

Eager Friday, February 25, 2011 02:57 AM

okzz
mine is different, its F.G college..

ok then, best of luck and pray for me, especially for essay,,, no preparation:ninja:
best of luck to you all..:):)

huma gillani Friday, February 25, 2011 01:42 PM

[QUOTE=Farrah Zafar;270891]
Here come sentences:

The amount they receive in wages is greater [B]than that of [/B]twenty years ago.
They succeeded [B](with)[/B] hardly making any effort.
Whatever have you done[B]?[/B]shyed ever bhi remove hona hai?
The officers were given places according to their [B](respective)[/B] ranks.:unsure:

[/QUOTE]

for the second one
they succeeded [B]without[/B] hardly making any effort.

for the third one
what have you done?
I am not sure....

Shahid Shakoor Friday, February 25, 2011 02:12 PM

hainnnnnnnnnnnn
 
[QUOTE=Farrah Zafar;270744]Shahid jo sentence tha us mein "freezed" likha tha so we are supposed to write its accurate [B]2nd form[/B].kia khayal hai?
sorry with ghalti se likha gaya.

rich ki 2nd form b rich e hoti hai richer nae:)

[B]Kashif hazir ho:D
Lets start correction.[/B][/QUOTE]

rich ki 2nd form bhi rich ho gi ha or mujy pta bhi ni chala:huh::huh:

Farrah Zafar Friday, February 25, 2011 02:38 PM

[QUOTE=huma gillani;271019]for the second one
they succeeded [B]without[/B] hardly making any effort.

for the third one
what have you done?
I am not sure....[/QUOTE]

Huma dear Hardly/scarcely negative sense mein use hotay hain tou they don't need any Without.They succeeded hardly making any effort.Wo koi khaas koshish kiye bina kamyab ho gaye.

@Shahid I apologize,last night Kashif cleared that rich-richer-richest:(

mhmmdkashif Friday, February 25, 2011 03:27 PM

Ok here come:

A good reader must be hardworking and possess intelligence.
I noticed Akbar was carrying a bag in his hand.
Having entered his hous, the door was shut at one.
He thinks that his writing is better than his friend.
I sent a verbal message to my friend.

Eager Friday, February 25, 2011 03:31 PM

[QUOTE=mhmmdkashif;271081]Ok here come:

A good reader must be hardworking and possess intelligence.
I noticed Akbar was carrying a bag in his hand.
Having entered his hous, the door was shut at one.
He thinks that his writing is better than his friend.
I sent a verbal message to my friend.[/QUOTE]

A good reader must be hardworking and intelligent.
I noticed Akbar carrying a bag in his hand.
Having entered his house, the door was shut at once.
He thinks that his writing is better than that of his friend.
I sent an oral message to my friend.

kya khayal hai?? mjhay lagta hai phir choka lag gaya... :D not sure about the third one

Farrah Zafar Friday, February 25, 2011 03:34 PM

aur mein chaye pee chuki hun:D


A good reader must be hardworking and [B]intelligent[/B]

I noticed Akbar [B](was)[/B] carrying a bag in his hand.

Having entered his house, the door was shut [B]at once[/B]
He thinks that his writing is better [B]than that[/B] of his friend.
I sent an [B]oral [/B]message to my friend.[/QUOTE]

mhmmdkashif Friday, February 25, 2011 03:35 PM

hmmm lagte to sab sahi hain.

yeh to sab sahi lag rahe hain :D

Kamran Friday, February 25, 2011 03:36 PM

[QUOTE=Eager;271083]A good reader must be hardworking and intelligent.
I noticed Akbar carrying a bag in his hand.
Having entered his house, the door was shut at once.
He thinks that his writing is better than that of his friend.
I sent an oral message to my friend.

kya khayal hai?? mjhay lagta hai phir choka lag gaya... :D not sure about the third one[/QUOTE]

I sent a message to my friend.

Regards.

mhmmdkashif Friday, February 25, 2011 03:37 PM

Shall you not take my word in this matter?
This poor man was suffering much for a long time past.
If he had not died, he would grow up to be a murdered.
I heard him went down the stairs.

Eager Friday, February 25, 2011 03:40 PM

[QUOTE=mhmmdkashif;271088]Shall you not take my word in this matter?
This poor man was suffering much for a long time past.
If he had not died, he would grow up to be a murdered.
I heard him went down the stairs.[/QUOTE]

[B]Will[/B] you not take my word in this matter? (couldn't think of any other change)
This poor man [B]has been[/B] suffering much for a long time past.
If he had not died, he [B]would have grown[/B] up to be a murderer.
I heard him [B]going [/B]down the stairs. :ninja:

Kamran Friday, February 25, 2011 03:42 PM

[QUOTE=Eager;271089][B]Will[/B] you not take my word in this matter? (couldn't think of any other change)
This poor man [B]has been[/B] suffering much for a long time past.
If he had not died, he [B]would have grown[/B] up to be a murderer.
I heard him [B]going [/B]down the stairs. :ninja:[/QUOTE]

Bravo,All sound correct :)

mhmmdkashif Friday, February 25, 2011 03:43 PM

Shall you not take my word in [B]the [/B]matter?

What about that.
I agree that the correction is in [B]will[/B], but this was also coming to mind :D

Why is my teacher replying late today, guess she has also just woke up like me :D.

Farrah Zafar Friday, February 25, 2011 03:45 PM

[QUOTE]Shall you not take my word in this matter?[/QUOTE]
Shall you not [B]have[/B] my word in this matter?

pichlay sentences meray aur Eager k same.amazing.mei ne cheating nae ki:(
Net mein masla aa ra hai,speed kam hai:(

mhmmdkashif Friday, February 25, 2011 03:51 PM

wow teacher rocks, Kamran sahib hee is ko mazeed check kar sakte hain, magar "Shall you not [B]have[/B] my word in this matter" ziada sahi lag raha hai :D.

Paper is made of wood.
Please tell me where is your brother?
Sajjad as well as Saleem were late.
He is the most cleverest boy in the class.
I have met him last month.
(2008, almost running out of exams :( )

PS. aap ko to net masla kar rahi hai, yahan pe exams ke aate hee 18 ghante loadshedding shroo ho gayi hai :(, abhi bhi generator chal raha hai.

Farrah Zafar Friday, February 25, 2011 03:55 PM

[QUOTE]wow teacher rocks, [/QUOTE]
Lakshami ap k qadam choomay gi...:D.(I mean Luck:D

Paper is made [B]up [/B]of wood.

[B](Please tell me)[/B] where is your brother?

Sajjad as well as Saleem [B]was[/B] late.

He is the most [B]clever[/B] boy in the class.

I [B]had[/B] met him last month.

[QUOTE]PS. aap ko to net masla kar rahi hai, yahan pe exams ke aate hee 18 ghante loadshedding shroo ho gayi hai :(, abhi bhi generator chal raha hai.[/QUOTE]
I pity your neighbours:D

Eager Friday, February 25, 2011 03:56 PM

[QUOTE=mhmmdkashif;271095]wow teacher rocks, Kamran sahib hee is ko mazeed check kar sakte hain, magar "Shall you not [B]have[/B] my word in this matter" ziada sahi lag raha hai :D.

Paper is made of wood.
Please tell me where is your brother?
Sajjad as well as Saleem were late.
He is the most cleverest boy in the class.
I have met him last month.
(2008, almost running out of exams :( )

[/QUOTE]

Paper is made up of wood.
Please tell me where your brother is?:ninja::ninja:
Sajjad as well as Saleem was late.
He is the cleverest boy in the class.
I met him last month.

again a four!!! :)
second sentence check kar de koi Allah ka banda

Farrah Zafar Friday, February 25, 2011 04:00 PM

[QUOTE=Eager;271101]
Please tell me where your brother is?:ninja::ninja:

He is the cleverest boy in the class.
[/QUOTE]

Lady jab [B]Where[/B] aa gya tou [B]please[/B] kehnay ki kia zaroorat hai?what do you say?
aur Clever ki 2nd,3rd form more aur most clever hoti hai.

mhmmdkashif Friday, February 25, 2011 04:00 PM

yeaa I hear them cursing us out after I turn the generator off :(.

You never remember third forms :D (He is the cleverest boy in the class). Download wordweb dictionary and install it in your computer, then just select any word anywhere and press ctrl+alt+w and it will give your all the details of the word, including synonyms and antonyms :D

Eager Friday, February 25, 2011 04:02 PM

[QUOTE=Farrah Zafar;271103]Lady jab [B]Where[/B] aa gya tou [B]please[/B] kehnay ki kia zaroorat hai?what do you say?
aur Clever ki 2nd,3rd form more aur most clever hoti hai.[/QUOTE]

clever, cleverer, cleverest (is pe main apni life ki shart laga sakti hun:) :)
where or please saath aasakta hai mere khayal me

Farrah Zafar Friday, February 25, 2011 04:02 PM

Kashif and Eager I checked clever ki comparative form more clever hai:(

Eager I meant jab baat clear hai Where is your brother?tou baqi sab additonal words hain..please tell me.

Shahid Shakoor Friday, February 25, 2011 04:02 PM

Bhai Jan
 
[QUOTE=Kamran;271086]I sent a message to my friend.

Regards.[/QUOTE]

i sent an oral message to my friend.(is ma kia mistake ha:?)

mhmmdkashif Friday, February 25, 2011 04:04 PM

I think Eager is rite there, because there is a '?' in the end of the sentence, so the phrase should be constructed in a more interrogative structure. What do you think. Agar aakhir main '.' hota to phir koi mistake hee nahin thee :D

about clever forms [url]http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/clever[/url]

Farrah Zafar Friday, February 25, 2011 04:07 PM

[QUOTE=mhmmdkashif;271110]I think Eager is rite there, because there is a '?' in the end of the sentence, so the phrase should be constructed in a more interrogative structure. What do you think.

about clever forms [url=http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/clever]Clever | Define Clever at Dictionary.com[/url][/QUOTE]

O yes Eager us ne intehai tension mein poocha hai zor de k..Please tell me where your brother is(I wanna beat him:D

Kashif is k baray kia khayal hai
[url=http://wiki.answers.com/Q/Is_clever_a_comparative_form]Answers.com - Is clever a comparative form[/url]

@SHahid Bhai jaan tou gaye:D

mhmmdkashif Friday, February 25, 2011 04:10 PM

[QUOTE=Farrah Zafar;271114]
Kashif is k baray kia khayal hai
[URL="http://wiki.answers.com/Q/Is_clever_a_comparative_form"]Answers.com - Is clever a comparative form[/URL]

@SHahid Bhai jaan tou gaye:D[/QUOTE]

hmmm, 'more' to qurbani kaa bakra hai, jab koi kaam na bane to 'more' ko laga do :D, but clever does have cleverer and cleverest as 2nd and 3rd forms :D. Waise 'more clever' kabhi ghalat nahin hoga.

Your writing is inferior than him.
Nothing but involves please him.
The teacher gave the boy an advice which he refused.
Is your dress different than mine?
He inquired whether I live in Karachi.

Eager come back, saboot has already been posted :D, and where is Kamran sahib.

Farrah Zafar Friday, February 25, 2011 04:14 PM

[QUOTE=mhmmdkashif;271115]hmmm, 'more' to qurbani kaa bakra hai, jab koi kaam na bane to 'more' ko laga do :D, but clever does have cleverer and cleverest as 2nd and 3rd forms :D. Waise 'more clever' kabhi ghalat nahin hoga.[/QUOTE]

ye b sahi hai:D

.Eager ne choonkay keh dia hai k wo jaan ki baazi laga de gi mger clever ko cleverest e kahay gi,dats Y ab wo saboot dhoond ri hai jan bachanay k lye:dd

Your writing is inferior [B]to[/B] him.
Nothing but [B]involvement[/B] [B]pleases [/B]him.
The teacher gave the boy [B]a piece of [/B]advice which he refused.
Is your dress different [B]than that[/B] of mine?
He inquired whether I live in Karachi[B]?[/B]

geefarid Friday, February 25, 2011 04:16 PM

its ok
 
[QUOTE=Eager;271106]clever, cleverer, cleverest (is pe main apni life ki shart laga sakti hun:) :)
where or please saath aasakta hai mere khayal me[/QUOTE]

[QUOTE=Farrah Zafar;271107]Kashif and Eager I checked clever ki comparative form more clever hai:(

Eager I meant jab baat clear hai Where is your brother?tou baqi sab additonal words hain..please tell me.[/QUOTE]

both are right as:

Two-Syllable Adjective Comparative Form Superlative Form
clever cleverer cleverest
clever more clever most cleve

mhmmdkashif Friday, February 25, 2011 04:24 PM

He inquired [B]if[/B] I live in Karachi.

Will that be OK...

They ran direct to their college. (PS: college and collage can be a pair of word question :D )
Extra attempt of any pat of the question on will not be considered.
This house is built of bricks and stones.
My friend is very ill, I hope he will soon die (:dd)
He is waiting for better and promising opportunity.

Farrah Zafar Friday, February 25, 2011 04:26 PM

[QUOTE=mhmmdkashif;271123]He inquired [B]if[/B] I live in Karachi.

Will that be OK...[/QUOTE]

:clap
Yup
wesay I think live nae[B] lived[/B] ho ga.what you say?

Shahid Shakoor Friday, February 25, 2011 04:26 PM

[QUOTE=Farrah Zafar;271114]O yes Eager us ne intehai tension mein poocha hai zor de k..Please tell me where your brother is(I wanna beat him:D

Kashif is k baray kia khayal hai
[url=http://wiki.answers.com/Q/Is_clever_a_comparative_form]Answers.com - Is clever a comparative form[/url]

@SHahid Bhai jaan tou gaye:D[/QUOTE]

Chalain baji to hain na ,,,wo hi bta dain,,,,,

one thing more ma ne expansion ko hath bhi ni lagaya abi tk plese os ke liye kuch tips batin....baqi kuch guzara hai

mhmmdkashif Friday, February 25, 2011 04:28 PM

yeh last hee hain, 2010, is ke baad papers khatam, i just discovered that sentences are repeated too sometimes :D.

Haan [B]lived[/B] hoga, kiyoon ke do sentences conntected hain aur pehla past tense main hai to doosra bhi past hoga, right :D

Farrah Zafar Friday, February 25, 2011 04:33 PM

They ran [B]directly[/B] to their college. (PS: college and collage can be a pair of word question :D )
Extra attempt of any part of the question [B](on)[/B] will not be considered.
This house is built of bricks and stones.(sahi hai)
My friend is very ill, I [B]fear[/B] he will soon die
He is waiting for better and [B]more[/B] promising opportunity

@ Shahid [B]Baji[/B]??
Allah se mUafi mango,kisi ka dil dukhanay ki saza pata hai?:dd

I didn't practice anything so I'm not in position to advise:(

Shahid Shakoor Friday, February 25, 2011 04:33 PM

plese correct
 
He spoke these words upon his face


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