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Ali Mallah Sunday, August 05, 2012 01:47 AM

[QUOTE=Farrah Zafar;462529]
We import the machineries from Punjab into Sindh.[/QUOTE]

I think machinery should be used instead of machineries, as machinery means components of machines and collection of machines.

Farrah Zafar Sunday, August 05, 2012 01:12 PM

[QUOTE=alimallah;462630]I think machinery should be used instead of machineries, as machinery means components of machines and collection of machines.[/QUOTE]

I also thought to replace machineries but couldn't get the reason.Your point is right.

alihashmatkhoso Sunday, August 05, 2012 01:53 PM

[QUOTE=Farrukh Aziz;462498][SIZE="6"]Correct the following:[/SIZE]

[B]1. She exclaimed surprisingly saying that she has lost her job and has fallen in a fix.
2. The Pakistan army invaded Indian army in 1971.
3. The Assistant Commissioner of Thul has built this monumental tower in collaboration of ASP.
4.As soon as I rolled up, I saw her embrace him.
5. Bird in hand is worth two in bush.
6.We import machineries from Punjab to Sindh.
7.He absented from the class.
8.SSP Sukkur, Pir Muhammad Shah, is Dabang of Sindh.[/B][/QUOTE]
1-She exclaimed surprisingly saying that she had lost her job and had fallen in a fix.
2-Pakistan army invaded Indian army in 1971.
3-Assistant Commissioner of Thul has built this monumental tower in collaboration with ASP.
4- no sooner I rolled up, I saw her embracing him.
5-A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush.
6-We import machinery from Punjab to Sindh.
7-He absented in the class.
8-SSP Sukkur, Pir Muhammad Shah is Dabang of Sindh.

Farrukh Aziz Sunday, August 05, 2012 04:23 PM

[SIZE="5"]All the respectable members are requested to participate in Correcting sentences.[/SIZE]

Saqib Riaz Sunday, August 05, 2012 04:37 PM

[QUOTE=Farrukh Aziz;462498][SIZE="6"]Correct the following:[/SIZE]

[B]1. She exclaimed surprisingly saying that she has lost her job and has fallen in a fix.
2. The Pakistan army invaded Indian army in 1971.
3. The Assistant Commissioner of Thul has built this monumental tower in collaboration of ASP.
4.As soon as I rolled up, I saw her embrace him.
5. Bird in hand is worth two in bush.
6.We import machinery from Punjab to Sindh.
7.He absented from the class.
8.SSP Sukkur, Pir Muhammad Shah, is Dabang of Sindh.[/B][/QUOTE]

1,She exclaimed surprisingly that she had lost her job and fallen in a fix.
2. The Pakistan Army had invaded Indian army in 1971.
3. The assistant commissioner of Thul has built this monumental tower in collaboration with ASP
4. As soon as I rolled up, I saw her embracing him
5. A bird in hand is worth two in bush
6, We imported machineries from Punjab into Sindh
7. He absented himself from the class
9. SSP Sukar, pir Muhammad Shah is Dabang of Sindh

mushtaque ahmed solangi Sunday, August 05, 2012 05:52 PM

please correct it

The camel is ____________ ship of the desert.

(A) a
(B) an
(C) the
(D) not

Qazi Sunday, August 05, 2012 06:04 PM

[QUOTE=mushtaque ahmed solangi;462829]Choose the correct option.

The camel is ____________ ship of the desert.

(A) a
(B) an
(C) the
(D) not[/QUOTE]



The camel is [B]the[/B] ship of the desert.

Farrukh Aziz Monday, August 06, 2012 02:04 AM

[B]CORRECT ANSWERS[/B]

[B]1. She exclaimed sorrowfully saying that she had lost her job and had fallen in a fix.
2. The Pakistan army attacked the Indian army in 1971. [B](invade is used for places)[/B]
3. The Assistant Commissioner of Thul has built this monumental tower in collaboration with ASP.
4.As soon as I rolled up, I saw her embracing him.
5. A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush.
6. We import machinery from Punjab into Sindh.
7. He absented himself from the class.
8. SSP Sukkur, Pir Muhammad Shah, is the Dabang of Sindh. (Reason:Proper noun (Dabang) used as a common one)[/B]

Farrah Zafar Monday, August 06, 2012 12:28 PM

[QUOTE=Farrukh Aziz;462992][B]CORRECT ANSWERS[/B]

[B]1. She exclaimed sorrowfully saying that she had lost her job and had fallen in a fix.
2. The Pakistan army attacked the Indian army in 1971. [B](invade is used for places)[/B]
3. The Assistant Commissioner of Thul has built this monumental tower in collaboration with ASP.
4.As soon as I rolled up, I saw her embracing him.
5. A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush.
6. We import machinery from Punjab into Sindh.
7. He absented himself from the class.
8. SSP Sukkur, Pir Muhammad Shah, is the Dabang of Sindh. (Reason:Proper noun (Dabang) used as a common one)[/B][/QUOTE]

Have you consulted any book for these answers?

[I][U]She exclaimed sorrowfully [B]saying[/B] that she had lost her job and had fallen in a fix.[/U][/I]

I think [B]saying[/B] should be omitted.

Farrukh Aziz Monday, August 06, 2012 01:26 PM

Yes I have come across this sort of sentences many times.


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