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Waqas77 Saturday, February 02, 2013 07:25 PM

Thanks Maria
 
Dear Colleague,

If you have some extra time , please also go through the thread of PRECIS . i had put a question in a thread but i guess everyone is busy in study to respond it.
It will also be a favor if you and other members check my precis efforts in the same sub-forum and point my mistakes out there.. thanks in advance.:):)

mariashamshad Saturday, February 02, 2013 07:25 PM

[QUOTE=Waqas77;550491]the word [B]this [/B]will remain the same as it's pointing towards present thing.

No need of word exclaiming and subsequently great. It's not wrong but stretched beyond its limits.[/QUOTE]

I was also thinking for the first sentence that "this" shouldnt change... But i consulted two books and found they didnt change it.... I was also confuse about it..
Even saadat ki book mei b is ki confusion ha... Like he said on page no 484
He sqid,"i will leave you now"
He said that he would leave them then
Even sir bukhari nay jo correction karwai unho ny b that hi likha hoa wahan pe.

He used this rule only when he is mentiong towards any object...

Waqas77 Sunday, February 03, 2013 11:34 AM

[QUOTE=mariashamshad;550513]I was also thinking for the first sentence that "this" shouldnt change... But i consulted two books and found they didnt change it.... I was also confuse about it..

He used this rule only when he is mentiong towards any object...[/QUOTE]

Now this is the main point my dear. How will we know that in which sentence examiner is pointing towards the present object or situation....?
Like, this sentence of yours can be interpreted in both ways. ;)

Afshan Choudary Sunday, February 03, 2013 11:52 PM

[QUOTE=Waqas77;550498]


[B][COLOR="Blue"]6) He said, "I don't know the way. Ask the old man sitting on the gate."[/COLOR][/B]
He said that he did not know the way ask the old man sitting on the gate.

6=> it's showing disjointed sentences. also confusing.... Any senior can help?[/QUOTE]

what if i solve it as...

He said that he did not know the way and suggested to ask the old man sitting on the gate.

Afshan Choudary Monday, February 04, 2013 12:03 AM

[QUOTE=Waqas77;550235][B][CENTER][COLOR="Purple"][SIZE="5"]2010[/SIZE][/COLOR][/CENTER][/B]

[COLOR="Purple"][B]4) 'By God', he said, "I do not know her nickname."[/B][/COLOR]
He exclaimed with an oath that he did not know her nickname.

[/QUOTE]

[QUOTE=Waqas77;549505][B][CENTER][COLOR="Purple"]2008[/COLOR][/CENTER][/B]

[COLOR="Purple"][B]vii. “By God”, he said” I do not know his name”[/B][/COLOR]
He exclaimed with an oath that he did not know his his name

[/QUOTE]

Just explored that the narration were correct...

seher bano Tuesday, February 05, 2013 07:31 PM

[QUOTE=Afshan Choudary;550403]

[B][COLOR="Blue"]4. She asked if he'd like to go to the concert and I said I was sure he would.[/COLOR][/B]
She said to me, "Will he like to go to the concert?" I said, "I am sure he will".[/QUOTE]

[COLOR="Purple"][B]She said to me, " would you like to go to the concert?" I replied, " I am sure he will."[/B][/COLOR]

[QUOTE][B][COLOR="Blue"]6. The teacher said, "You must not forget what I told you last lesson. I shall expect you to be able to repeat it next lesson by hear."[/COLOR][/B]
The teacher advised us not to forgot about her last lesson and expected us we to be able to repeat it following lesson by heart.
[/QUOTE]

[COLOR="Purple"][B]The teacher asked them not to forget what he had told them last lesson and added that he would expect them to be able to repeat it next lesson by heart.[/B][/COLOR]

seher bano Tuesday, February 05, 2013 08:44 PM

[QUOTE=Afshan Choudary;547836][CENTER][SIZE="5"][COLOR="Blue"][B]2002[/B][/COLOR][/SIZE][/CENTER]

[B][COLOR="Blue"]3. They say. "Is this the right time to arrive, Aren't you forgetting something"?[/COLOR][/B]
They ask whether that is the right time to arrive and if you are not forgetting something.
[B][COLOR="Blue"][/QUOTE]

[COLOR="DarkOrchid"][B]They ask whether that is the right time to arrive and if they are forgetting sth.[/B][/COLOR]


[QUOTE][B][COLOR="Blue"]5. The master said, "How long will you take in warming my food".[/COLOR][/B]
The master inquired me how long i would take in warming his food.[/QUOTE]

[COLOR="DarkOrchid"][B]The master enquired of/asked me how long I would take in warming his food.[/B][/COLOR]

[QUOTE][B][COLOR="Blue"]8. "What a lovely evening!" Said Irum.[/COLOR][/B]
Irum exclaimed with joy that was a lovely evening.
[/QUOTE]

[B][COLOR="DarkOrchid"]Irum exclaimed with joy that that was a lovely evening.[/COLOR][/B]

seher bano Tuesday, February 05, 2013 09:09 PM

[QUOTE=Afshan Choudary;549326]
[CENTER][COLOR="Blue"][SIZE="5"][B]2003[/B][/SIZE][/COLOR][/CENTER]


[COLOR="Blue"][B](9) "How wonderful! Why didn't you suggest this plan earlier".[/B][/COLOR]
He exclaimed with joy why I had not informed him about this plan earlier.[/QUOTE]
[B][COLOR="DarkOrchid"]
He exclaimed with great joy [B]saying that[/B] why I had not suggested [B]that[/B] plan earlier.[/COLOR][/B]

[QUOTE][COLOR="Blue"][B](10) He said, "Let's wait till the road gets cleared".[/B][/COLOR]
He suggested us to wait until the roads got cleared.[/QUOTE]

[COLOR="DarkOrchid"][B]He suggested to wait till the road gets cleared.[/B][/COLOR]

mariashamshad Tuesday, February 05, 2013 09:30 PM

[QUOTE=seher bano;551779][COLOR="Purple"][B]She said to me, " would you like to go to the concert?" I replied, " I am sure he will."[/B][/COLOR]



[COLOR="Purple"][B]The teacher asked them not to forget what he had told them last lesson and added that he would expect them to be able to repeat it next lesson by heart.[/B][/COLOR][/QUOTE]

She said to me,"will he like to go to the concert? I said," I am sure he will"

The teacher advised us not to forget her last lesson and expected us to repeat ,that following lesson by heart.

Afshan Choudary Wednesday, February 06, 2013 05:32 PM

[B][CENTER][SIZE="5"][COLOR="Blue"]2012[/COLOR][/SIZE][/CENTER][/B]

[B][COLOR="Blue"]1) He said to us, "You cannot do this problem alone".[/COLOR][/B]
He told us that we could not do that problem alone.
[B][COLOR="Blue"]
2) The beggar asked the rich lady if she could not pity the sufferings of an old and miserable man and help him with a rupee or two.[/COLOR][/B]
The beggar said to the rich lady, “Will you not pity the sufferings of an old and miserable man and help me with a rupee or two?”

[B][COLOR="Blue"]3) The Commander said to the soldiers, "March on".[/COLOR][/B]
The commander ordered the soldiers to march on.

[B][COLOR="Blue"]4) He entreated his master respectfully to pardon him as it was his first fault.[/COLOR][/B]
He said , "Please pardon me, It is my first fault"

[B][COLOR="Blue"]5) "Do you really come from America? How do you feel in Pakistan?" Said I the stranger.[/COLOR][/B]
I asked the stranger if he really came from America and how he felt in Pakistan.

[B][COLOR="Blue"]6) The officer threatened the peon to come in time otherwise he would be turned out.[/COLOR][/B]
The officer said to the peon, "Come in time otherwise you will be turned out".
[B][COLOR="Blue"]
7) People wished that the Quaid e Azam had been alive those days to their fate.[/COLOR][/B]
People said," the Quaid e Azam would have been alive these days to our fate".

[B][COLOR="Blue"]8) They said, "Brave! Imran, what a shot".[/COLOR][/B]
They applauded Imran for a shot.


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