Crtically analyse my precis (1999)

[khanbaba512]

To have faith in the dignity and worth of the individual man as an end in himself, to believe that it is better to be governed by persuasion than by coercion, to believe that fraternal goodwill is more worthy than a selfish and contentions spirit, to believe that in the long run all values are inseparable from the love of truth and the disinterested search for it, to believe that knowledge and the power it confers should be used to promote the welfare and happiness of all men, rather than to serve the interests of those individual and classes whom fortune and intelligence endow with temporary advantage – these are the values which are affirmed by the traditional democratic ideology. The case of democracy is that it accepts the rational and humane values as ends and proposes as the means of realizing them the minimum of coercion and the maximum of voluntary assent. We may well abandon the cosmological temple in which the democratic ideology originally enshrined these values, without renouncing the faith it was designed to celebrate. The essence of that faith is belief in the capacity of man, as a rational and humane creature to achieve the good life by rational and humane means. The Chief virtue of democracy and the sole reason for cherishing it is that with all its faults it still provides the most favourable conditions for achieving that end by those means.


Title:
Advantages Of democracy:

Democracy in its true spirit is based on the principle of welfare of whole society rather than serving the vested interest of indivduals or a perticular class.It recognizes the true human value,acknowledging human consent rather than using of voilence to acieve goals.In realtiy,we have ignored all the values enshired in its sprit.Besides flaws in it is still the best option to live a good life and achieve our goals

Required words 81
given 74

[soloflyer]

Originally Posted by khanbaba512

To have faith in the dignity and worth of the individual man as an end in himself, to believe that it is better to be governed by persuasion than by coercion, to believe that fraternal goodwill is more worthy than a selfish and contentions spirit, to believe that in the long run all values are inseparable from the love of truth and the disinterested search for it, to believe that knowledge and the power it confers should be used to promote the welfare and happiness of all men, rather than to serve the interests of those individual and classes whom fortune and intelligence endow with temporary advantage – these are the values which are affirmed by the traditional democratic ideology. The case of democracy is that it accepts the rational and humane values as ends and proposes as the means of realizing them the minimum of coercion and the maximum of voluntary assent. We may well abandon the cosmological temple in which the democratic ideology originally enshrined these values, without renouncing the faith it was designed to celebrate. The essence of that faith is belief in the capacity of man, as a rational and humane creature to achieve the good life by rational and humane means. The Chief virtue of democracy and the sole reason for cherishing it is that with all its faults it still provides the most favourable conditions for achieving that end by those means.


Title:
Advantages Of democracy:

Democracy in its true spirit is based on the principle of welfare of whole society rather than serving the vested interest of indivduals or a perticular class.It recognizes the true human value,acknowledging human consent rather than using of voilence to acieve goals.In realtiy,we have ignored all the values enshired in its sprit.Besides flaws in it is still the best option to live a good life and achieve our goals

Required words 81
given 74

There is one golden rule that you can never violate while writing a precis i.e, never write anything that is not written in the original passage."In realtiy,we have ignored all the values enshired in its sprit"... nothing of this sort was written in the original passage. re-write again and concentrate on the idea given.

[khanbaba512]

Originally Posted by soloflyer

There is one golden rule that you can never violate while writing a precis i.e, never write anything that is not written in the original passage."In realtiy,we have ignored all the values enshired in its sprit"... nothing of this sort was written in the original passage. re-write again and concentrate on the idea given.

" We may well abandon the cosmological temple in which the democratic ideology originally enshrined these values, without renouncing the faith it was designed to celebrate"

Then i think these lines means that we may change the nature of democratic setup but the original spirit remains the same? am i right?

[soloflyer]

Originally Posted by khanbaba512

" We may well abandon the cosmological temple in which the democratic ideology originally enshrined these values, without renouncing the faith it was designed to celebrate"

Then i think these lines means that we may change the nature of democratic setup but the original spirit remains the same? am i right?

yes you are right , it means that the spirit of democracy must always remain the same..