plz check my preci

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preci (real words )

armaments are fruitless . they have no harvest save in death and destruction . The ships the gun the air -ships the aeroplains , the rifles ,the ammunition , the uniform ,the stores all these are things of memento ,quickly consumed or quickly scraped because they become obsolete almost as soon as they are made .
the great warship is built and less then ten years it is out of date .
the new land monster ,the tank which may be described as a land ironclad is as costly as locomotive engine but while one is a waste of material ,the other is a mover of passengers or goods . the aeroplane is always being altered and in its use kills one or two fine young men every week .
in one recent year the nations of the world spent 4580.000.000 on armies navies and air forces , this huge sum could be spent on the erection of glorious cities, the construction of splendid canals,the regeneration of the material capital of mankind .
the world change out of knowledge in its material aspect if in twenty years such a sum were devoted to public purposes .the housing question would be a triifle if only part of the expenditure on armaments were employed for the splendid purposes of giving comfort to hardworking people


Title Missuse of money
Armaments are not as useful as the condition of our country
every year massive amount of money is spent on weapons but they get usless ,,if this amount is used for constructing the splendid citits and canals then so much housing question can be reduce ...
plz tell me my mistake

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Nice effort, title is more or less suitable. Try to make a proper coherence in your precis and be precise as mush as you can..Overall its a great effort. Best of luck for your next attempt.