[QUOTE=Jabbar Raheem;886275]i guess not... there's a gaping difference[/QUOTE]

Which gape? Please elaborate it.

[QUOTE=exclusively;886278]Which gape? Please elaborate it.[/QUOTE]

Perception can be -at best- an aspect of influence... influence and misconception are world apart concepts... ambivalent has explained what can be included in influence

[QUOTE=exclusively;886277]You are certainly right. I will discuss this thing in every paragraph though, I will contrast both of said points. I attempted these outlines om 10 mintues and did not even rechecked, there are many points to be mentioned. I used to draw my outlines in one hour, the rest write-up takes maximum one and half hour. So consider my outlines as a first draft.[/QUOTE]

Your outline is good, just try to work on the topic for four or five minutes by understanding its theme before drawing your outline. Never restrict yourself to just one angle. And never insert religion, politics,etc. as your only tools to gamble with in your essay. Make it varied and relevant.

[QUOTE=Ambivalent;886281]Your outline is good, just try to work on the topic for four or five minutes by understanding its theme before drawing your outline. Never restrict yourself to just one angle. And never insert religion, politics,etc. as your only tools to gamble with in your essay. Make it varied and relevant.[/QUOTE]

I have passed essay paper twice, do you know they want us to attempt our paper with bravery. If you are brave enough in your ideas and flow, no one can let you down. I thought to divide it in sub headings but that time I was watching news channel and posted it straight away. However, I have got your point, I know you will get it done too. Thank You.

[QUOTE=exclusively;886285]I have passed essay paper twice, do you know they want us to attempt our paper with bravery. If you are brave enough in your ideas and flow, no one can let you down. I thought to divide it in sub headings but that time I was watching news channel and posted it straight away. However, I have got your point, I know you will get it done too. Thank You.[/QUOTE]

haha okay. Don't be angry bro. InshaAllah you will do it again. Make sure you clear it again this time.
What topics did you attempt in 2013 and '14 essay papers?

[QUOTE=Ambivalent;886293]haha okay. Don't be angry bro. InshaAllah you will do it again. Make sure you clear it again this time.
What topics did you attempt in 2013 and '14 essay papers?[/QUOTE]

Hahah I don't get angry I am cool :) In CE~13 & CE~14 I attempted Not economy but politics is a key to success and Great nations win without fighting respectively. I skipped CE~15 on account of being in a maze of Composition paper only.

[QUOTE=exclusively;886296]Hahah I don't get angry I am cool :) In CE~13 & CE~14 I attempted Not economy but politics is a key to success and Great nations win without fighting respectively. I skipped CE~15 on account of being in a maze of Composition paper only.[/QUOTE]

Oh! I am sorry to hear about it. What were your marks in composition papers of both the years? And what do you think is wrong in your english that resulted in your failure twice?

[QUOTE=Ambivalent;886306]Oh! I am sorry to hear about it. What were your marks in composition papers of both the years? And what do you think is wrong in your english that resulted in your failure twice?[/QUOTE]

As far as I do remember in my first attempt, my composition score was 29 and in the second it was a horrific nightmare in speite of wasting my time on precis and comprehension. In essay paper, CE~13 fetched 53 and CE~14 yielded only 44 scores. Therefore, statistics shows, CE~16 would likely be more exceeding fewer marks. Nothing can be said as per the scoring trend of FPSC. This time I feel, if I pass composition, will sail my aag ka dariya insh'allah.

@exclusively
please write introduction of your essay on which you share outline.

[QUOTE=musmanhussain;886344]@exclusively
please write introduction of your essay on which you share outline.[/QUOTE]

Which essay are you talking about, please do let me know I will attempt it, at the moment, I am trying to articulate my passage on the follwoing topic:

[B]Women empowerment in Pakistan [/B]
Women empowerment in Pakistan is nominally. Although Islam and the constitution of our country acknowledge the empowerment of woman, yet she can not get her socioeconomic, political and religious empowerments. Since ages and till today, she is in a miserable circumstances, exploited in rights and deemed as a source of fertility to give birth to babies. Moreover, it is a common misconception and misinterpretation by the orthodox Ulemas that to empower woman means to liberalize her like the woman of the western world, which is unacceptable in Islam. Such dilemma is adding fuel to the fire. In actual infact, the empowering women means to empower her in the due rights given by the law. These rights are such as to get education, freedom of marriage, job, expression and liberty etc., with certain limitations in accordance with the Islamic law and constitution. But unfortunately, today, the land of the pure people’s women, are killed in the name of hounor. She has no permission to get married, education, and to take any decision as per her own will. Thereby, to empower woman in Pakistan has become a very difficult task like a hard nut to crack. Nonetheless, it is the time that we should take constructive initiatives to empower our women. Because not only Islam, nor any religion and neither the constitution of Pakistan, gives permission to violate the women’s rights and her empowerments. Therefore, it is the duty of government, international community, civil society and every individual to empower the woman to bring about a positive change across the globe.


Please assess my passage, "CHECK MY GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES" strictly, it would be so nice of you.

Thanks in anticipation.

[QUOTE=musmanhussain;886344]@exclusively
please write introduction of your essay on which you share outline.[/QUOTE]

Sure, that one I will attempt tomorrow, because it is too late and I am about to sleep now. As I have to get up early morning for my job. Good Night :)