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Please evaluate outline on the topic " truth is a rare commodity, despite the freedom enjoyed by print and electronic media". Kindly pinpoint every shortcoming and do add any important missing aspect.
A. Introduction
B. Role of media in improving standards of information
C. Factors that make the truth rare commodity
1. Dominance of non professionals in the industry
2. partial and subjective approach in covering different issues
3. Race of ratings
4. Lack of professional editorial policy
5. Dysfunctional media regulatory authorities
6. Sensationalism
7. Revenue hungry media houses
8. Lack of accountability
9. High level of inaccuracies
10. Lack of social responsibility
11. Deviation from journalistic norms and ethics
12. Race to break the news first
13. Internal conflicts among different channels
14. Growing competition to survive in the long run
D. A comparative analysis of pakistani media and BBC.
E. Conclusion

All seniors and subject specialists are requested to comment. Have I took the topic rightly??