Hi bro will you post your outline too...

[QUOTE=zealot;918734]Hi bro will you post your outline too...[/QUOTE]

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Almost all main headings included approximately 03 to 04 sub-headings. Moreover, I gave references from the Quran and quotes by scholars for justification of my points.

Seniors plz evaluate my outline of the said topic.

-Introduction

-Repercrussion of being one's own enemy.

▪Self-destruction.

▪Arrogance - a personality trait.

▪Going out of way to harm others.

▪Refusal of helping others.

-Individual wrong being leads to the

Societal wrong being.

▪A dirty fish contimates the whole pond.

▪Bad habits are fatal.

▪Incompetents resort to violence.

-Thesis statement.

"Self friendship is the only way to a successful life."

▪Avoidance from negativity.

▪Prevention form negative thoughts.

▪Random acts of kindness.

-Sincerity with ownself is sincerity with the whole mankind.

▪Discovering own abilities.

▪Social contributions.

▪Promoting positivity.

-Self Evaluation.

▪self- image impacts performance.

▪Changing weaknesses into strength.

▪Being real-self.

- Conclusion

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My Suggestions
 

ESSAY: We have to learn to be our own best friends because we have fallen too easily into

1. Unrealistic Expectations and that Continually Disappoints Us
2. Too Much Focus on Material Things
3. Focus on What We Don’t Have Rather than What We Do
4. Being Too Hard on Ourselves
5. Analyze and Over-think Everything
6. Want the Quick Fix Rather Than Working Hard Toward a Better Outcome
7. Make False Assumptions and React Based on Them
8. Feel We Can’t Ever Succeed So We Give Up Too Easily
9. Not Making the Choice of Closure and Moving on
10. Not Accepting What We Say What We Want

hello everyone, can anyone please evaluate my outline for the said topic:

[B]Outline:
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(A) Introduction
1) Who do we classify as best friend?
2) Who is an enemy?
3) How does nature and nurture plays its role?

(B) How can we become our own best friend?
1) we can be our own best critic
2) we can groom our self through self-analysis
3) take care of our health, hygiene and fitness
4) only we can motivate ourselves to aspire for greatness
5) only we are aware of our struggles

(C) How can we Fall into the Trap into of our own enemy?
1) overthinking and over criticism leading to depression and anxiety
2) not paying attention towards our surroundings, health and fitness
3) being influenced by other's achievements
4) lose hope easily

(D) Conclusion