How Covid-19 has exposed the necessity of health education in our schools

[SuhailAhmedChanna]

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In contrast to other countries, Pakistan comes in one of those countries where early health education is almost negligible.

How Covid-19 has exposed the necessity of health education in our schools

“Every change bears the seeds of opportunity, and so the pandemic also bears the seeds of opportunity in disguise.”

Introduction:
• It’s been revealed that over 95% of the world’s population has health problems but COVID-19 has exposed the grave necessity of health education in our school system and need to standardize the curricula to palliate and rehabilitate the ‘Holistic Health’ problems before going at alarming stage.

Covid-19 has affected the whole world
• Current situation and statistics
• The potential disaster almost in every sector due to the outbreak of Covid-19
• Health system has been completely dilapidated to overcome the pandemic globally

Why health education is necessary in our schools:
• Healthy body breeds a healthy mind (teaches about physical, mental, emotional and social health i-e health is wealth)
• To originate the importance and awareness of healthy lifecycle (education include regular body care, personal hygiene, weight monitoring, exercise, immunization, disregarding substance abuse and unhealthy diets, and stress-free social interactions, etc)
• Encourage the students to actively participate in health sectors (could resist alcohol, smoking etc)
• Will produce highly skilled professionals in health sector ( Doctors, nurses etc)
• Helps To cut down the risk of any kind of infection or dieses (prevention is better than cure)
• Chances will increase to timely combat and protect humans from sudden outbreaks (Scientific observations and experiments)
• Lessen the unpredictable catastrophes ( Economy, health, education etc i-e postCovid situation)
• boost up in the field of health sciences ( Hospitals, clinics, More research work will be promoted)
• Fall off human loss ( death ratio will decrease)
• Strengthen country’s position/ governance ( country’s image, ratings, etc)

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[GhazMar]

This is not a good outline at all.

In your thesis statement you've mentioned 95% of the world's population has health problems. Are you sure about this? does that mean out of a global population of 7 Billion, over 6 Billion people have health issues?? Considering half of the world's pop is below the age of 30, this seems an unbelievable number.

Current situation and statistics what? you have to be more specific.

Fall of human loss?? You need to improve your english.

[SuhailAhmedChanna]

In your thesis statement you've mentioned 95% of the world's population has health problems. Are you sure about this? does that mean out of a global population of 7 Billion, over 6 Billion people have health issues?? Considering half of the world's pop is below the age of 30, this seems an unbelievable number.

search WHO official site you will get your answer

Current situation and statistics what? you have to be more specific.

Read above outline as mentioned "Covid-19 has affected the whole world"
current situation and overall statisticcs due to covid-19 i-e loss in every sector and human loss (death and recovery)

Fall of human loss?? You need to improve your english.

its Fall Off please read carefully first . Fall off (decrease in number, amount, intensity, or quality)
thanks.