"Outline" Energy crises in Pakistan
 

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1- Introduction
2- Energy production and Consumption portfolio sector wise
2.1- Electricity Sector
2.2- Natural Gas and Gasoline
2.3- Agricultural Sector

3- Contribution in Energy production Sources wise
3.1- Non-Renewable energy sources
3.2- Renewable energy resources

4- Causes of Energy Crises
4.1- Governmental fix purchase agreements with IPP's
4.2- Inefficient Transmission mechanisms
4.3- Huge communication Chasms between producers and consumers
4.4- Increasing dependence on Imported fuel
4.5- Fluctuation in International Oil markets
4.6- Hijacking of local market by Oil mafias
4.7- Centuries old Cultivation and harvesting practices
4.8- Dearth of Governmental Institution for proper check and balances

5- Road towards future
5.1- Revise agreements done with IPP's
5.2- Allocate fix number of energy units per month on the basis of
previous consumption record
5.3- Restructuring of national energy commission
5.4- Use locally available fossil fuels
5.5- Encourage Industries to produce their own Power
5.6- Shift towards more clean Energy production technologies
5.7- Invest in power innovation and research
5.8- Introducing Robust bureaucratic management mechanisms for
effective check and balance
5.9- Appointing more specialist professionals on competitive seats

6- Conclusion

Is this an outline for English essay or for Pakistan affairs paper?

It is a very good outline. Just expand it a bit. For example , with renewable and non renewable sources you can give percentage of these sources in energy mix of Pakistan. Or maybe make new heading for energy mix of Pakistan. Overall you attempt is awesome and it has got nearly everything that any good outline demands.
Best of luck.

Noted Sir, Thankyou
It is for Essay paper

the outline is very good. almost everything got covered in it

outline of an eassy
 

yeah, it is a good outline but I think that you should add names of renewable and non renewable resources and the GDP too, as it will cause a brilliant effect on your essay outline.

[QUOTE=bakhtawar sikander ali;1119097]yeah, it is a good outline but I think that you should add names of renewable and non renewable resources and the GDP too, as it will cause a brilliant effect on your essay outline.[/QUOTE]

But maybe then an essay will become more technical , it will be like solving EDS or environmental science paper . She has used some technical words in her outline but filling an outline with more words like those may have a negative effect . One can use detailed information in an essay .
There is other side of this view too , as you said , that she can give names of renewable and non renewable resources , but it would be better to just write a point of renewable and non renewable resources and then explain about them in the body of essay .