Plz help me understand the reason of my low score in Essay 2010

[wajid_khan]

Guys here goes my DMC

Essay 12
Precis 74
Current Affair 67
Pakistan Affair 49
Everyday Science 69
Islamiat 62

Indo Pak 59+67
Geography 47+59
Sociology 61
Muslim Law 60
Total 674

This was my first attempt and I am shocked to see my Essay marks to be that low.Could somebody point out as to what might have gone wrong with my essay ???Please suggest some remedy as well

[ShirazaH86]

what was ur topic?

[wajid_khan]

"The U.N.O has failed to measure up to the demands of its charter" was my topic and I still cant figure out what went wrong

[kashifilyas]

hmm it was a bit tricky,
what was your topic shirazah?

[anticlock]

my two friends got through by this essay, u must read the charter

[J.Zaib]

Need of UN,
Formation of UN,
Structure of UN,
Then need of charter,
Charter of UN & then
Mentioning the points of charter one by one & giving current situation & their implementation by UN alongwith each point.

[ronakbaig]

@ wajid khan

i think.....

failure of u.n to solve,

kashmir problem
palestine vs israel problem(two state solution)
palestine war(2008-2009)
Iraq war (u.n was sidelined by u.s)
north korea problem()
iran problem.(failure to stop uranium enrichment)
georgia war (no action by u.n against russia).
other humanitarian problems etc..
mass grave issue in kashmir 2009.
hindu-muslim riots in india (i hope 2002).

etc

you have done well brother,kindle help me as well

book+ strategy(your way of preparation) for ,

1- EDS
2- Islamiat
3- current affairs
4- pakistan affairs

book for

1- Sociology.
2- pakistan affairs (after 1947)...


brother this my last attempt so i would be thankful to u if u share your experience ..
kindly tell me what was your pattern of attempting questions in each subject.

waiting for your kind response,
regards
ronakbaig

[Salman5]

@Ronakbaig

Thanks for your help with the essay. But please do keep in mind that this thread is specifically created for helping one member with the essay in the Essay forum. Kindly post your questions about other subjects and their books in their relative forums. Please refer to the following links:

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[Minhas1]

Dear Wajid if your roll no is 10186 you have passed so why making place in this thread??

moderators plz chk such instances