Making pakistan an investor`s friendly country

[Ismail]

I m writting here an easy so that u should understand my weaknesses clearly and sujjest me something.


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`If you wanna be bad ,you gotta be good`
One fine evening listening to Brian addams,i heard him singing this song. Here the singer is saying to his beloved that if you r so bad,no matter, but soon with my hard work,i will make u good.
Just like Brian addams concerned for his beloved,we can make Pakistan a more prospherous and investor`s friendly country through our hard work and dedication.If Japanese, after the world war can make their country developed, so why not we?
Investment,as an Economist may define is,the spending of finances on new projects.Investment clearly indicates the type of development going on in the country.Forgetting the exceptional cases,more investment ,as a sociologist may sujjest is,the type of peace and security in the host country.

Pakistan is the country having many problems in catching more investment.The main problems that make investors away from the country are, sectarianism ,terrorism,corruption,some old customs shading the face of the nation wrongly ,child labour,law and order.


Pakistan has a greater possibility for investment in some sectors like tourism,tele communication,oil and gas,electricity ,minerals,Gwader sea port and a lot more.


The recent situation in the US is decreasing the investment by the Arab countries in the US and EU countries,which altimately favours Pakistan.


An other option which is making the country more profittable for the investors is Balochistan.As indicated by an American author,the world in going to shift for its oil and gas reservs to Balochistan as these reserves are on decrease in Arab countries.

Here is a greater possibility for investment in Pakistan,but the things which matter are the deliberate attemps to curb some basic problems facing the country, as quoted earlier.


Hence then we will justify Brian Addams in his song for his beloved and Pakistan will certainly gotta too good.

[Adil Memon]

My Beloved Brother,

Sorry for replying you late. I didn't even notice that you posted the essay in compliance to my request.

Well, I read it. It was nice. I can estimate that you have a good understanding of things however expression power is a little loose. I thought your writing would be having so many mistakes and glitches. But, Lo and behold, to my surprise its quite comprehensive. In my opinion, you were supposed to knock an attempt this time. Well lets not cry over spilt milk.

You were very right to evaluate yourself. I can see some grammatical mistakes. However don't be worried about them that much. To tell you the truth, everybody makes them.

I already suggested you to rewrite passages from the Dawn Newspaper. After casting a glance at your essay I would also suggest you to work out on:

Practical English Grammer (by Thompson and Martinet)
(Suspicious regarding the writer names , can't recall English names )

The book has three volumes. It is also recommended in the syllabus I reckon. This book will civilize your grammar. Move from volume 1 - 3 to achieve success.

I believe you can understand things in the actual perceptions quite easily. Don't worry! You seem to have improved a lot over all this year of studies. As you are going to appear in 2006, I envisage you on a very high pedestal in near future.

Dear Ismail, let me tell you an adage worth lacs, "The difference between the learnt and the unlearnt is the time which the learnt has spent learning".

Its the world of give and take. You give your time... and take away the label.

Regards,
Adil Memon

My overall assessment is positive. Good Luck! Don't get off the distinguished road!