kindly check my essay outline

[hadia Khan]

why is there no status of third gender in Pakistan?

Outline: [LIST][*]Introduction[*]Third gender in Pak History (population
their community, their living style, mughal period is their goldern era).
Status of third gender in Islam (Divisipon of gender in Groups, Hadith on them, surgery allowed making bodies in line, deal with apparent traits of gender)
their status in pakistani society (they are cursed and disgraceful, violence on them, miserable life in Pkaistan, sources of income)
causes of their miserable condition in Pkaistan ( discriminated women, unemploymed community, inculsion into the institution of prostitution, engage in inappropriate activities)
supreme courts verdict (issuing of ID cards, protection from harrasement)
conclusion

[aariz]

Originally Posted by hadia Khan

why is there no status of third gender in Pakistan?

Outline: [LIST][*]Introduction[*]Third gender in Pak History (population
their community, their living style, mughal period is their goldern era).
Status of third gender in Islam (Divisipon of gender in Groups, Hadith on them, surgery allowed making bodies in line, deal with apparent traits of gender)
their status in pakistani society (they are cursed and disgraceful, violence on them, miserable life in Pkaistan, sources of income)
causes of their miserable condition in Pkaistan ( discriminated women, unemploymed community, inculsion into the institution of prostitution, engage in inappropriate activities)
supreme courts verdict (issuing of ID cards, protection from harrasement)
conclusion

good but short outline. Add more data into the outline to make it attractive. Write it in bullets.

[Fading Glimpse]

@hadia khan... good effort if its your first try
add one more thing which is also important, " role of families in bringing up, owning and disowning their children" because its very serious issue in this connection that the families of such off springs disown them and they are left alone to face the odds of life....

[dr250]

aoa
first of all i would like you that write ur out line comprehensively as was written in the essay paper of 2009, 2010 and 2011.. ok

your out line is ok but needs imp[rovement

one nmore thing that regarding the outline you must adop a simple method which can be easily applied to any topic eg like ur topic

why is there no status of third gender in Pakistan?

introduction of topic
importance of third gender
world history regarding stauts of third gender
islamic history regarding stauts of third gender
pakistan history regarding stauts of third gender
causes of ...... (1,2,3,4,5,.......)
impacts of ......(1,2,3,4,5,6,........)
suggestions and recommendations .......(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,,,,,)
conclusion and then finally the abstract/ summary of the essay but with different words mentiond earlier in the eassy...

for suggestions and recommendations... just change/ oppoite the factors and causes and u will get them....

hope u understand and get the idea
will be there to help u any time
best wishes ws

[hadia Khan]

thnx jiashah 4 suggestions....... thnks aariz, i was actually writting it in bullets, bt due to power shortage i wrote it in hurry.... that's y it look like a rough work...... thnks dr250, i have a query 4 u, sir what u suggested is like suggestion of ma thesis instructor.... by ur suggesion i came to know that it is like thesis... is it so?????????/ and one more question, sir if i write these basic headings in any essay, it will be good... headings like, intro, importance, causes, recommendation, conclustion and finally cruks(summary).....

[aariz]

Originally Posted by hadia Khan

thnx jiashah 4 suggestions....... thnks aariz, i was actually writting it in bullets, bt due to power shortage i wrote it in hurry.... that's y it look like a rough work...... thnks dr250, i have a query 4 u, sir what u suggested is like suggestion of ma thesis instructor.... by ur suggesion i came to know that it is like thesis... is it so?????????/ and one more question, sir if i write these basic headings in any essay, it will be good... headings like, intro, importance, causes, recommendation, conclustion and finally cruks(summary).....

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